There are good man everywhere. I only wish they had louder voices.
到处都是好人,我只希望他们声音大一些。
--Louis L'Amour 路易斯.拉穆尔
The better we feel about ourselves, the fewer times we have to knock somebody else down to feel tall.
我们的自我感觉越良好,我们就越用不着把别人打倒在地才觉得自己伟大。
--Brian Lanker 布赖恩.兰克
The miracle is this--the more we share, the more we have.
神奇的是我们分享得越多,我们拥有的也越多。
--Leonard Nimoy 伦纳德.莫尼哀
It is awfully easy to be hard-boiled about everything in the daytime, but at night it is another thing.
在白天对什么都不动感情是极为容易的,但在夜晚就是另外一回事。
--Hemingway 海明威
A mother becomes a true grandmother the day she stops noticing the terrible things her children do because she is enchanted with the wonderful things her grandchildren do.
如果有一天,母亲不在为儿子做的糟糕事操心,而为她的孙子孙女做的令人惊讶的事而欣喜,她就是一位真正的祖母。
--Loise Wyse落伊丝.怀斯
Somewhere in the world there is defeat for everyone. Some are destroyed by defeat, and some made small and mean by victory. Greatness lives in one who triumphs equally over defeat and victory.
在这个世界的某一地方,每个人都会失败,有的人为失败所毁,有的人被成功变得小气吝啬。同时战胜失败和成功的人才是了不起的人。
--John Steinbeck 约翰.斯坦贝克
Don't fool yourself that you going to have it all. You are not. Psychologically, having it all is not even a valid concept. The marvelous thing about human beings is that we perpetually reaching for the stars. The more we have, the more we want. And for this reason, we never have it all.
别欺骗自己以为你能得到一切。你办不到。从心理学角度说,拥有一切甚至都不是一个有意义的概念。人类的精彩之处是我们永远伸着手想摘星星。我们得到的越多,想要的就越多。由于这个原因,我们永远不能拥有一切。
--Joyce Brothers乔伊斯.布拉泽斯
There are lots of people who mistake their imagination for their memory.
有许多人将他们的想象当做记忆。
--Josh Billings 乔希.比林斯
To err is human, to forgive, divine.
人皆犯错,你能原谅别人,你就是圣人。
--Pope 蒲柏
People throw away what they could have by insisting on perfection, which they cannot have, and looking for it where they will never find it.
人们往往坚持完美而扔掉了一些他们原本可以有的东西,但他们是不可能拥有完美的,虽然他们还在永远找不到完美的地方到处搜寻。
——Edith Schaeffer 伊迪丝·谢弗
What we all tend to complain about most in other people are those things we don't like about ourselves.
在别人身上我们抱怨最多的东西往往也是我们自身中自己也不喜欢的东西。
——William Wharton 威廉·沃顿
Only God is in a position to look down on anyone.
只有上帝才处于可以俯视所有人的位置 ——Sarah Brown 萨拉·布朗
There is a limit at which forbearance ceases to be a virtue.
忍耐超过了一定的限度便不再是美德了。——Edmund Burke 埃德蒙·伯克
(1)履行好自己的职责,不管诱惑多大,都不能迷失自我,坚持干好本职工作。
(2)贪图享受者、沉沦诱惑者必将被人唾弃,被社会抛弃。现实生活中,也有这样一些懒猫,主人把它们喂得饱饱的,而它们却尸位素餐,不去坚守自己的职责,在生活富裕的情况下忘记了自己的职责,啃老族、不思进取者、坐享其成者,不也是那三只猫的化身吗?人生在世,诱惑很多。丰厚的利,华丽的衣,可口的食,诱人的“鱼”……凡此种种,大有“乱花渐欲迷人眼”之势,如果沉迷其中必将丧失自我,丧失原则。
(3)时代在变革,生活水平在提高,可是优良的传统不能丢,不能忘了本真——猫天生要捉老鼠,猫的立身之本也在于捉鼠,而非吃鱼!
(4)不能盲目从众,要有自己正确的辨别力。大家都在吃鱼,而另外一只猫在捉老鼠。对于有鱼吃还捉老鼠这个方面可立意为“不能怕别人的风言风语,不要盲目从众,要仔细甄别”。
Recently, an investigation has caused heated debate among the society. The result of the investigation has showed that about 50% of students in cities have private tutors. Some people think it’s quite necessary to hire a tutor to help the students with their homework, while some people argue that hiring a tutor has more disadvantages than advantages.
最近,一项调查结果在社会上引起了强烈讨论。调查的结果显示:在城市中有大约一半的学生请家教。一些人认为请家教辅导学生写作业很正常,而另外一些人则认为请家教弊大于利。
Why private tutoring is so popular? Well, many parents, for different kinds of reason, did not have the chance to receive a good education. When their children have problems in their study, they become helpless. Turn to the tutors for help seems to be the only solution.
为何家教如此流行?很多家长,因为某些原因,没有得到很好的教育。当他们的孩子在学习中遭遇困难时,他们变得手足无措。而请家教就成了的解决方式。
On the surface, hiring a tutor can help students to improve their marks, but in fact, it takes up too much time of the students’ time that they will have no time for rest and entertainment. They spend all their time on study, they don’t have time to do exercise or play outside. What’s more, some teachers are eager to help students to do well on the exams, offering unnecessary tasks for the students, in this case, the students burden will be very heavy to some degree. Thus, I think it’s not necessary to have private tutors.
表面上看,请家教能帮助学生提高成绩。但实际上,它占用了学生过多的休息于娱乐时间。学生们把所有的时间都花在学习上,都没有剩余的时间去锻炼或者出去玩。更糟糕的是,有些老师忙于帮学生提高成绩,无意中给学生增加了很多压力。因此,我认为请家教弊大于利。
我刷完历年阅读之后决定准备作文,毕竟作文30分,是仅次于阅读的大头。
很焦虑,看到网上有人推荐利用艾宾浩斯记忆曲线规律去背诵作文,每隔1 2 4 7 15 天重复记忆一遍,据说一轮下来能够牢固掌握。
我抱着好奇心尝试了一下,为自己的背诵计划做了个表格:
做完之后,坚持了十几天,我笑了。
表格里的红色部分是10月15号当天需要完成的任务,首先我要新背诵第15篇范文,背诵完默写,这花了我1个多小时。背完新的复习旧的,复习第14篇,第12篇,第8篇范文和第1篇,依然是背诵默写,4篇文章前后加起来又花了两个多小时。
每天光应付作文就三四小时,单词还要背1个小时,阅读理解做1个多小时,新题型和完型还没开始练,整个人像热锅上的蚂蚁。
心想,花了这么多时间背诵,总要有点效果吧,于是我信心满满打开黄皮书,想尝试着自己写一篇,结果令我大失所望,如果你坐在我旁边,你会看到一个手里拿着笔,眼睛盯着漫画,面无表情,一动不动的,木偶人。直观感受,跟便秘一样。
背文章这个方法本身不可能有错,到底是哪里出了问题?我琢磨了很久,一度消沉,直到某一天我翻看专业课教材的时候,灵光乍现,顿悟。
我学的是经济,在经济学里,但凡涉及到经济变量(如通胀率,失业率和利率等)变化趋势的研究,首先应该明确的是前提条件——long-term (长期) or short-term (短期),不同的时间跨度下,经济变量会有截然不同的演变趋势。
这里的“经济变量”叫做背范文。
我大彻大悟,背诵范文这件事,长期坚持可能有效,但短期来看绝对没效率!
短短几个月备考时间,背几十篇甚至上百篇文章,这个行为感动的是自己,阅卷老师并不相信眼泪。不要在成就自己的时候先感动自己。
背范文只不过是我们脑子里进行的被动“接收信号”的过程,背诵的时候我们会不由自主地停留在舒适区,不期望过多思考,只是在期待有一个好的结果。
但写作文是我们脑子里进行的主动“发射信号”的过程,脑子必须不停地运转,不停地构思,不停地做取舍,不停地做假设,不停地为下一步做打算,才有可能将你提前准备的英文语料又好又快复现到答题纸上,完成一篇高质量的考场作文。
所以,绝大多数的老师或学长学姐只是在强调“接收信号”过程的重要性,而对“发射信号”过程避而不谈,让人误以为背完了必背范文100篇就真的能文思如泉涌。退一步讲,即便能,要花多少时间下去,我们考研时间有限,每天争分夺秒,就算这个方法合理,但它真的合适吗?
王江涛老师并没有说错,他对考生的背诵要求是:滚瓜烂熟,脱口而出,多多益善。这三点包含了“接收”和“发射”两个过程,若能做到,确实会对写作有实质性的提高。但反过来,如果有人能做到这三点,那么此做法已经超越了背范文的范畴,他是真正在学习英语,而不是在准备考研英语应试,这个方法最适合的是那些希望终身保持英语学习,顺便通过考研的学生。
那学长不是啊,我本身并不是一个热爱学习的人,对英语更甚。掐指一算,还有两个月不到就要考研了,我的愿望是在有限的备考时间里,通过有针对的刻意练习,最后拿个稳一点的作文分数,帮我英语取得高分,考上浙大。
漫画作文是看图作文的一个类别,命题人通过夸张、象征等手法,借助幽默、诙谐的画面,讽刺、批评或歌颂某些人和事,启迪人们感悟深刻的道理(寓意)。所以,漫画作文给予学生发散性思维和创造性思维的广阔空间,同时,对学生通过对漫画的观察与分析而进行正确审题的能力又有较高的要求。要想在漫画作文中准确审题,要注意以下几个方面:
1. 观察漫画中的人物,推测人物之间的相互关系
2. 抓住漫画中的主要景物,推导出这些景物的具体指示和内涵意义
3. 确定漫画揭示的主题和应该体现的感情色彩,是弘扬还是批判,须干脆利索。
In this society, nobody can live without money. It seems everything we need will use money to acquire. Then, here comes the question, can money buy happiness? Some people say that money is the source of happiness. With enough money, people can go to the places they never been, buy the things they ever want. So, they come to the conclusion that money is everything. It can buy happiness. And it’s also the resource of happiness. However, in my humble opinion, money can not buy everything, happiness is not all the thing that money can buy.
在这个社会,没钱就不能生活下去。看起来我们想要的一切都需要钱去换取。然后,问题就来了:钱能带来幸福吗?有人说钱是幸福的根源。有了足够的钱,人们可以去从来没有去过的地方,买自己想要的任何东西。所以,他们得出结论:钱就是一切,钱也能买幸福。然而,在我看来,钱不能买一切,也不包括幸福。
There is no denying that money is useful. The chief thing to remember is we must be the owners of money, not to be the slaves of money. We must let the money to work for us. If we don’t have the right attitude toward to money, we may be in big trouble. Countless people break the laws because of money. In this case, you can not live in happiness. Just as the old saying goes, money cann’t buy everything, but without money, you can do nothing. Only with the proper use, money can bring us happiness.
无法否认钱很有用。需要记住的是我们应该成为钱的主人,而不是钱的奴隶。我们要用钱为自己工作。如果我们对钱没有一个正确的态度,那么我们就会陷入_烦。为了钱,不计其数的人违反法律。在这种情况下,钱就不能带给人们幸福感了。就像那句老话所说,钱不是万能,但没有钱,万万不能。只有正确的使用,钱才能给我们带来幸福。
考英语那天下午,考场外几乎每个人手里都拿着一本必背范文××篇,嘴巴里不知道在念叨着什么东西,时不时撇一眼周围同学,生怕别人听到,又怕别人听不到,表情里充满了焦虑。突然,老师提醒大家该进考场了,一片哀嚎。
那天我匆匆吃完午饭,便跑到考点学校的图书馆,拿出纸和笔,花了半个小时左右的时间,从头到尾默写了一遍我的英文语料,然后检查错误或遗漏。然后开始午睡,脑子里对作文只有一个念头——尽管放马过来。这种自信不是凭空捏造出来的,是平时真刀真枪杀出来的。
一、投诉信
Dear Mr. President:
I am sophomore from the Department of Law. I’m writing the letter in purpose of complaining about the food and service in the canteen or campus.
To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the food quality, price and service in the canteen. First, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same. Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside of the canteen always seem untidy.
To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students’ supervision. Dining is an everyday issue for students. It may affect their academic performance. Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above be solved as soon as possible.
二、求学信
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a Chinese student who wish to study at your prestigious/esteemed university . My plan is to start my course next term , and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I alreaday had a bachelor’s degree from BeiJing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements . Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self –supporting. I would be interested to here if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards a commodation?
I look forward to your reply. and to attend your esteemed institution.
Yours Sincerely
LiMing
三、感谢信变体
September 10th is the day that every student should bear in mind. It is the time to express our congratulations to our teachers,who have devoted most of their time and energy to us.
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude; I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by taxi. If it had not been for my teachers’ timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious.
Everyone agrees that it was his quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.
I will repay my teacher’s kindness with my unselfish help to others. Although nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like my teacher, this would be a much nicer place.
这类作文时,注意以下几点:
审题时,除了要把握好图表的表层信息外, 还要分析图标的深层含义,如原因、根源、可能的发展趋势等。图表中所提供的说明文字往往是问题的切入点,一定要仔细分析。
描述数据时要抓住重点,为中心服务,不必面面俱到,切忌毫无目的地罗列图表中的数据。如果数据较多,抓住图表中的极端点(如最大或最小、最多或最少,最好或最差)和基本相同进行描述。
主题句应明确,最好放在文章的开头,这样会使重点突出,主题明了。
常见模板
第一段:总体描述图表,指明时间段,指出突出变化或不同
常用句型或短语:
As is clearly shown in the char/ table/graph, ___________
According to the figures given in the table/chart/graph, ____________
It can be seen from the table/chart/graph, _____________________.
The figures in the table/chart reflect that ________________.
especially, ________________(指出突出变化)
第二段:(分析原因)
There are several factors leading to this change / difference ……..
There are several reasons for _____________.(引出原因)
To begin with, _______(原因一)
In addition, ______________(原因二0
For example, _________(举例说明)
Last but not the least, __________(原因三)
To sum up――――――――――――――(简要总结)
第三段:自己的观点
As for me, ____________
On the one hand, ________
on the other, ____
In brief,_____________________.
数据变化常用句型
表示逐句增长
The number of …. has grown steadily from … to…..in .
has risen from ….
shows a tendency to increase
climbed
went sharply up
soared
tends to go up b/ increase
There was a rapid / sharp / dramatic / gradual / slow increase / rise in the number of …. who…..
The number of …. is on the rise / increase.
The increase of …. has reached to ….表示数据降低
The number of … dropped steadily from … to …in .
declined suddenly
fell
tends to go down
tendency to fall
shows a tendency to decrease
There was a sharp fall …. in the number of … in 2008.
gradual decrease
sudden reduction
slow decline
drop
学长英语一85分,作文小分成绩浙大是不给的,但可以大致推测一下,客观题扣7分(考完对了何凯文的答案,错2个新题型+6个完型),翻译题交卷前10分钟开始做,一口气涂了10行连我自己都看不懂的中国话,自我预估顶破天5分(全国平均分3分)。所以学长英语一能上85,作文立了大功!
之所以分享经验,一来比较有心得,二来实在看不下去了,为什么这么多人都喜欢在作文上走弯路,还走的津津有味。
漫画,就是用简单而夸张的手法来反映现实生活或时事的特殊艺术形式。它用夸张的手法达到表现幽默而深刻的主题思想的艺术效果。所以对于漫画作文的审题立意,其关键是读懂漫画。
首先,要从整体上来认识漫画,弄清漫画的画面意义。这主要看画面特征与构图要素之间的关系,从特征中找到“话题”,从关系中找到“情节”,从而找到画面显示的显性主题或故事。
其次要理解漫画,一般来讲,漫画多是对现实生活的喜剧化、夸张化、荒诞化表现,往往含有“借题发挥”的深刻寓意,画面中越是夸张得厉害的地方越是问题的症结,也越是体现寓意的地方,因此,要注意透过夸张解读其寓意,理解漫画针对什么问题,表达了怎样的观点。
最后要拓展漫画,依据画面意义及其寓意,展开联想。分别从相关、相似、相对、相反、因果、条件等诸多方面,联系现实生活,找到与画面主旨相对应的现实素材,尽量从不同的角度、不同的领域、不同的侧面来思考。立足于画面内涵,着眼于现实生活。从画面与现实的“勾连”中,确定话题及立意的方向。要达到能将理论映照到具体的现实题材的目的。
Apprently, the vivid picture given above portrayed that a teacher and her student are praising the convenience of remote education. When it comes to the choice between studying in traditional colleges and self-studying through Internet, recently more people choose to receive remote education.
In the eyes of those people studying through Internet, remote education has its own advantages which are beneficial to their study. In the first place, studying through Internet is more efficient and flexible because learners will not be bound up in the classroom at the required time. In the second place, they can listen to the lessons from the famous teachers who are uneasy to contact at campus.
But remote education is still far from perfection. On one hand, staying before computers too long will make students neglect the importance of communication. On the other hand, different from the traditional teaching methods, students find it more difficult to get feedback from their teachers on time.
In my opinion the remote education represents the trend of educational development and the most effective way to realize the popularity and justice of educational resource. Of course, presently it is only a complement to the traditional education.
以上就是为大家整理的英语四级作文范文十篇参考的相关内容,希望能够对大家有所帮助。作文范文有很多,在看的时候一定要吸取里面好的句子,掌握文章中的结构,这对于自己的写作都是很有帮助的。
Directions: Write a composition entitled My Views on Examination. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 大学都用考试来衡量学生的成缋
2. 考试可能带来的副作用
3. 我对考试的看法
My Views on Examination
我对考试的看法
Nowadays the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject in most colleges and universities. Although it is efficient, its side effects are also enormous.
现在在大多数学院和大学,考试被用来衡量学生在学习某门课程上 是成功还是失败的主要方法。虽然这很有效,但它也有很大的副作用。
On the one hand, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. taught successfullywith ations. On the other hand, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. Atheexaminations corejis the only criterion for his academic performance students driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.
一方面,考试降低了教学标准。由于经常通过考试成绩来评判老师, 他们就会降低要求至只训练学生的考试技巧。以参加考试为目标的话, 没有课程能被成功地教授。另一方面,最有害的影响就是,考试助长了 学生不好的学习习惯。由于考试成绩是评断他学习表现的标准,学 生被迫机械地记忆,而不是进行创造性的思考。
In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students' academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations? (153 words)
事实上,我们中很少有人承认考试对学生学业的发展有任何真正重 要的作用。如果真的是这样的话,为什么我们不做个改变,设计出一些 比考试更有效更可靠的东西呢?
先列一下我用过的参考书:
去年第一次接触到作文是在张剑黄皮书里,05年到14年,10年真题作文看下来,我迷失在了高端又高冷的范文丛中,每一篇都充斥着一股“高难动作,切勿模仿”的气息,直观感受,写是写的真好,学是真的学不来。
很焦虑,人一焦虑就喜欢买东西,我买的便是这几本畅销的作文书。但我告诉你,不动脑筋光看这几本书,会更焦虑。
先综合评价一下:
《潘赟考研英语高分作文》
《何凯文写作高分攻略》
《王江涛考研英语高分写作》
《朱伟写作宝典》
总结:
上面这几本书都是考研名师花了许多心血编撰的,跟他们相比我实在不值一提,上面的评价只不过是我以考生的角度发表的个人经验之谈,没有任何贬低的意思,我根本没这个资格。
以我的备考经验来看,这几本书最大的价值如下,同学们可以参考一下。
我的评价并非完全客观,毕竟一本书给与我们的意义,除了它自身的价值外,还取决于我们为它付出的时间和花的心思。
长期来看,吃透任何一本作文书,都能让你写作取得高分。
但考研党没这么多时间,考研不单单考英语一门课,时间是给死的,12月份是一定要上战场的。
既然如此,我们就需要动点脑筋去应付考场作文,学会应试,花较少的时间,记较少的东西,拿较高的分数。
怎么做呢,你还得往下看。
一般来说,没有给出文章开头的纯开放型英语漫画作文都有相对稳定的构架模式:第一段简单描写漫画中的内容;第二段阐述漫画所反映的社会现象或深刻哲理;第三段则是表达自己的观点。
值得注意的是,在第一段简述漫画内容的时候应该采用一般现在时态或者现在进行时态,而不应该选用一般过去时态。这也是漫画作文与普通的看图作文的基本区别。普通的看图作文往往都展示的是一个发生过的具体事实,用纯粹过去的时间去记叙这个事实,然后简要谈谈自己的观点,所以属于“记叙+议论”的体裁;而漫画作文是用一幅图画通过夸张的手法展现一个社会现实和人生哲理,然后就这个现实或哲理谈谈自己的看法,所以是“说明+议论”的体裁。
感谢信
20 June
Dear Mr. Seaton,
Thank you very much for taking me with you on that splendid outing to London. It was the first time that I had seen the Tower or any of the other famous sights. If I'd gone alone, I couldn't have seen nearly as much, because I wouldn't have known my way about.
The weather was splendid on that day, which I thought was rare. I still remember some people told me that in Britain there was weather and no climate. During the same day, it might snow in the morning, rain at noon, shine in the afternoon and be windy before the night falls. So I think I was lucky.
I think the river trip was the best thing of all. London really came alive for me as we saw it from the Thames during that wonderful journey down to Greenwich. It was all tremendously exciting - a day that I shall never forget.
Thank you for giving me such a great birthday treat.
Yours sincerely,
Linda Chen
我的做题顺序是大作文,小作文,阅读,新题型,完型,翻译。因为我本人对作文最有信心,所以放在第一位,有的同学喜欢先做阅读,有的同学喜欢从头做到尾,我觉得问题都不大,不管黑猫白猫,能拿高分就是好猫。
考场写作跟平时模拟最大的区别就是,审题难度提高了。平时模拟的那几幅破漫画早就被你来来回回看了好几遍了,漫画主题词也老早在作文书里看到过了,这直接导致很多同学忽视审题过程,脑子里没有审题的概念。虽然考前准备了很多语料,却发现在考场上根本审不出主题词,前功尽弃。
下面学长详细介绍一下审题过程,分“是什么”,“为什么”和“怎么做”三块内容来讲解。
以学长亲身经历过的2019年英语一漫画作文《途中》为例 (花10秒看漫画,不然下面的介绍你会读不懂)
审题是什么:
不要以为“审题”这两个字有多么高端,讲的通俗一点,就是你看到一幅漫画,思考一下它在讲一件什么事情。
一般思路:谁,在哪里,在干嘛
或者用刚才提到的思考程序:中心事物→位置→动作→状态
19年漫画讲的就是:两个人在爬山,一个人抱怨累,另一个人递水并鼓励同伴。
为什么要审题:
很显然,审题不仔细会导致偏题呀。
考研英语大纲里写作部分的评分标准划分为五档,其中离题类文章是最低档,分数一般是1-4分,如果完全不符,也有0分的可能。
19年漫画《途中》,有人写坚持,有人写鼓励,也有人写陪伴或者乐观,这些都行。但你要是写了尊老爱幼或者创新,就是严重偏题,牛头不对马嘴,即使你语言多么优美结构层次多么鲜明,都无济于事,老师会觉得你根本没看过漫画。
但也不要因此畏手畏脚,我结合四本作文书,分析了历年满分作文和考试大纲,考生并不需要百分百精确抓住漫画主旨,“精确抓住漫画主旨”,这句话本身就是一个伪命题,一来没人做得到,二来根本没必要,一千个读者就有一千个哈姆雷特。
写作内容跟漫画沾边就行,阅卷老师反倒喜欢大家多元化的想法。如果19年几百万考生写的全是“坚持”,千篇一律,那老师估计也要改到吐了,实在太单调。
怎么做:(重点)
记住一个字,“圆”,自圆其说的圆。
第一步,把陌生的漫画圆成你熟悉的主题。
比如19年,你考前只准备了与“陪伴”相关的语料,但是审题后,你第一反应漫画讲的是“坚持”,你很难过,没有提前准备到。但再仔细一看,似乎也能用“陪伴”来论述这幅漫画,你很开心,能用上提前准备好的语料了。
能不能?肯定能。准不准?鬼知道准不准,阅卷老师都没有标准。注意我上面的措辞,“似乎也能用”,所以,如果你问我,到底怎么确定漫画主题,我想,“似乎也能用”就是一个很好的标准。
第二步,把中文主题转换成一个英文主题词(比如,坚持 → persistence)
转换成英文主题词之后,利用学长在上面介绍的利弊分析法,从多个万能写作角度平行展开,夸赞“坚持”,“坚持很重要,有助于实现人哪方面的发展”,一篇考场作文就完成了。
审题搞定了,作文也写完了,之后干嘛呢,当然是检查。
一篇英语作文主要有以下四个易错点:
具体哪些易错点就不展开了,每个人都有自己的雷区。
很多同学检查的时候会选择一遍遍反复看文章,时间不知不觉就过去了,可能错误也还是没发现。
提醒一下,重点要检查的是自己平时写作时常犯的错误,比如我平时经常忘记第三人称单复数,考场上检查的时候就先检查这方面的错误。
写完之后尽量不要乱涂乱画,即使必须要修改,也要保持卷面整洁干净。
审题→动笔写作→检查,这就是一套完整的考场作文操作流程。
最后,从考场表现来看,我花了20分钟完成大作文,10分钟不到完成小作文 (其实后期模拟的时候基本也是这个速度),为阅读和完型让出大量宝贵的时间。写完作文之后感觉整个人的考场心态都变好了,自信心得到了提升。
Dear Manager,
尊敬的经理:
Thanksfor reading my resume. My name is Daniel, an undergraduate from Hunan Normal University. I apply for the position that you offer in your company's website. My major is Chemistry. I chose it as my major because I think chemistry playsan important part in our daily life. Once I was a little boy, I liked using myhead. I always keep this good habit wherever I go. Thus I always can think someeffective ways to handle the difficult problems.
感谢你能查阅我的简历。我叫丹尼尔,毕业于湖南师范大学。我申请的这个职位是在你提供的公司网站上看到的。我的专业是化学。我选择了它作为我的专业是因为我觉得化学在我们的日常生活中扮演着一个重要的角色。在我还是个小男孩的时候,我喜欢动脑筋。无论我走到哪里,我一直都保持这个良好习惯。因此,我总是想出处理难题的有效方法。
Istudied hard at school, so I got the bachelor’s degree. During four yearslearning in university, I have not only learned a lot of useful knowledge, butalso improved my comprehensive abilities. What’s more, I go in for English somuch and work very hard on it. Because of my diligence, I have already passedCET-6. By the way, I also learned some computer skills in my free time, making mean expert on computer.
在学校我很努力学习,所以我获得了学士学位。在四年的大学学习中,我不仅学到了许多有用的知识,同时也提高了我的综合能力。更重要的是,我非常喜欢英语,也很努力学它。由于我的勤奋,我已经通过了大学英语六级考试。顺便说一下,在我空闲的时间里我也学到了一些电脑技术,使我成为电脑专家。
Atlast, I’m eager for the chance that you are going to give me. Although I havejust left school with little experience, I still have confidence in myself, sinceI’m a person with a great will. I enjoy challenging my life. I think I’m responsibleand conscientious. Believe me, I’ll do everything to the best of my ability.
最后,我渴望得到这个机会。虽然我刚刚毕业没有什么经验,但我仍然对自己有信心,因为我是一个有着坚定意志的人。我喜欢挑战生活。我觉得我是一个自觉、有责任感的人。相信我,我会尽我的能力来把事情做到。
Sincerely yours,
Daniel
丹尼尔
作文要不要看视频课?
不建议。考研说到底拼的是时间和方法,单词和作文,这两块内容,我坚定不移地唱衰视频课的重要性,老师或学长永远无法代替你去完成语料默写这个最艰难也最重要的过程。
我能不能自己创造优美的语料去应付考研作文?
对大多数基础一般的考生而言,作文要想取得高分,就应该极力避免自己创造句子,而应该当一个优质语料的搬运工,这样做最省时,最安全,最有希望拿高分。
怎么看待满分范文?
范文历来是考研作文争议最大的点,到底好不好,我认为应该辩证地看待。从背诵的角度,我不推荐背范文,甚至反对;从积累的角度,范文里有部分值得摘录的优质语料,是高分素材。
有必要在做阅读的时候去摘录语料吗?
可以摘,但是没必要。
考场写作需不需要打草稿,在草稿纸上写出整篇文章后誉到答题卡上可行吗?
不建议,非常浪费时间。如果你能像我一样,考前熟悉不同话题的写作套路,熟练掌握自己的作文笔记,在考场上完全不需要打草稿,顶多列个提纲或者个别关键主题词,然后在答题卡上直接写作即可。
提前准备作文的性价比高吗,要不我还是继续刷阅读和完型吧?
作文是所有题型里最适合应试的,也是考研党最容易忽视的一个题型。我花了大半年的时间刷阅读理解,考前仍然战战兢兢,考场上屏气凝神。反观作文,我只花了两个月时间准备,却成了我考前最有信心的题型,考场上文思如泉涌。
据我观察,很多人情愿花大量时间刷完型和翻译,也懒得去准备作文。其实,完型和翻译考查的是我们长期积累的英语素养,在短时间内很难有所突破,你刷了很多题并不意味着你考场上能取得高分,可能还不如裸考的同学,但学长并不是建议你们不准备完型和翻译,只是说时间分配上应该要合理。
学长的写作方法是否可以提高真正意义上的英语写作水平?
从长远来看,我的写作方法其实不利于你写作水平的真正提高,因为思路太单一了,只会写一种类型的文章。但从短期应付考研来看,这却是不二之选,纵使漫画千变万化,而我以不变应万变。
考场作文,究其本质,是一种呈现在阅卷老师眼前的视觉效果,这就意味着有漏洞可钻,可以找到“欺骗阅卷人”的方法——提前准备固定的写作思路,提前准备优质的语料,阅卷老师看完必须拍手叫好啊,他也不会说觉得你这篇文章写的好就找你过去再写一篇,默默打个高分就完事了。
如果你的字本来就好看,请忽略这段文字。
写的不尽人意的同学,需不需要练字,我觉得要分清主次。
时间紧迫的同学,优先背诵语料,不要说还剩一周就考研了,你还把手头的作文资料放一边去练字,这叫本末倒置。考场上你首先得保证有料可写,其次才是追求写的漂亮。
时间充足,距离考研还有一个月以上的同学,我教你怎么练:
毋庸置疑,一手好字肯定是加分项。
我备考的时候时间紧,没有练字,本身字也不好看。我是考完后才听说,练字性价比很高,坚持一两个月就能有不错的效果,所以书写这个点我还是有点遗憾,本来作文应该能考的更高。
不过最后我分数也不低,间接证明了我的语料质量还是比较高的。但你们不要效仿我,要好好练字哦。
投诉/抱怨信
Dear Sir,
I saw your advertisement for “the perfect lighter” in Sunday Times last week and immediately sent off a £2 postal order and the completed form for the lighter.
Imagine my surprise when all I got in return was a box of matches! I could understand a mistake. I might even pardon a joke. But in this case, your advertisement is a deliberate lie since a friend of mine who also sent the coupon got the same result.
I think it's a shame to promise an economical lighter when in fact you are not selling a lighter a1 all. Instead of saying it works quickly, you should admit that you are offering matches. And what about “only” £2: I usually pay 10 pennies for a box of matches, and they are often given away free.
I regard your advertisement as a serious deception and demand that you send me my money back immediately. Otherwise I will take active steps to make sure the Consumers' Association hear about it.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Li
Sample Writing 2:
12 March 2006
Dear Sir,
考研英语作文万能好句漫画类
考研英语一作文一般以漫画为主,对于的广大考研学子而言,漫画作文仍然是复习的重点。
对于英语一大作文的写作, 大作文一般有3个段落组成,第一段:描图,第二段:对图画所反映的现象进行解释,第三段:个人就此发表看法或提出观点。现在距离20考研越来越近,在这个非常重要而紧迫的时期,笔者总结了一个万能的作文模板,任何的写作类型都可以运用这个格式进行套用。
第一段:what a vivid cartoon it proves to be! The underlying meaning embodied in it can not be underrated, in that the cartoon reflects a not uncommon social issue, from which we can clearly observe that…(描图:对图画的内容进行具体的描述)
第二段:it is a universally-held view that the above-mentioned cartoon a deeply illustrates a social issue which is catching more and more attention from the general public currently. And then, What prove to be the reasons leading to it? admittedly, 3 reasons stated as follows can be taken be accountable for it. First and foremost,(阐释具体的现象或原因)more importantly, (阐释具体的现象或原因),last but not the least.(阐述具体的现象或原因)
第三段:according to my personal perspective, some strong and effective measures should be implemented to put an end to this issue,(如果是不好的`社会现象就用这句话),(some effective measures should be implemented to be in support of it(如果是好的现象就用这句话)).On the one hand, organs concerned should do their best to make rigorous laws and regulations, on the other hand, the society as a whole should enhance their public awareness, only by taking these measures can we have it resolved completely.
最后,我们有必要对年的考研大作文进行预测,很有可能就会考关于安全(地铁安全)或社会公德(小悦悦事件)的话题。所以笔者提醒2012年的考生在平时复习备考中一定要关注相关的话题,以储备材料,做到心中有数!
一般的漫画作文一般可分为三个步骤,即:
1)describe the drawing briefly.
2) explain its intended meaning and give examples(if necessary)
3)give your own comments or opinions
各部分常用的表达
描述图画部分:
1)From the cartoon we can see that…
2) As is shown/indicated in the picture
3)This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
4)Look at the picture. It is a picture about…
论述漫画寓意及所反映现象部分
1) What it illustrates is a common phenomenon in today’s
society./ Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.
2) This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.
3) What the cartoon reflects set me thinking a lot. 4)After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today’s society,… 5)The cartoon implies that…… 评论与观点部分 1)As far as I’m concerned, what we have to do is to make full use of……and also……If we……and……, it will not only……but also…… 2)We can learn from the picture that 3)Consequently, it is high time that measures should be taken to avoid this phenomenon from happening again. 4)Therefore, I am firmly convinced that… 5) Let’s call on everybody to……In the long run, it will have a negative influence on constructing a harmonious society.
Wechat is very popular nowadays, even the foreigners are crazy about this communicative tool. The functions of Wechat are various, such as talking to friends and paying the bill.
微信现在很受欢迎,甚至连外人都喜欢上这个社交工具。微信有很多功能,比如和朋友聊天、支付账单。
One of the hottest functions is to send red packet. If people want to catch everybody’s attention in the group talk, sending a red packet works well. Everybody is excited to share the money and they will feel lucky if they get the money.
好热门的功能之壹是发红包。如果有人想要在群聊里吸引大家的注意力,发个红包就可以了。大家对这壹功能都很兴奋,如果抢到钱,就会觉得很幸运。
This function brings happiness and I love it so much. Sometimes when I hear the voice, I will open the phone and try to get the money as soon as possible. When I open the red packet, I will be very happy.
这个功能给大家带来了快乐,我也很喜欢这个功能。有时当我听到声音,我就会打开手机,以好快的速度去抢红包。当我打开红包时,我就会非常高兴。
做完笔记,很多同学都喜欢把笔记供起来,当花瓶,放在桌子上最显眼的地方,巴不得走过路过的每一个研友都能看到。
记住,一份好的笔记不应该是摆设。无论笔记做的多么花里胡哨,只要你脑袋里空空如也,还是白搭。你要是能把笔记稳稳地装进脑袋里,又能随时随地从脑袋里把干货复现到答题纸上,这才叫真本事。
有些同学也想着去利用笔记,但是呢,方法上可能有所欠缺。我见过一些人,条件反射,一看到笔记里的英文句子就想着跑去走廊疯狂背诵,学长不禁感慨,头是真的铁。
读出来固然有利于培养语感,提高熟练度,甚至还有可能在走廊偶遇小姐姐。但学长认为,光靠背诵英文语料来利用这份笔记,存在以下两个缺点:
针对这两个缺点,学长分别开出两剂药方。
利用这样的方法,我花了不到十天的时间便熟练掌握了这份笔记。万事俱备,只欠实战。
12月初,我用自己的笔记套用了10年,15年和18年的三篇作文,因为它们分别属于社会文化,科技,和个人品质三类话题,我想以此来做个检验,这样备考能否助我高分。
如何检验呢?张剑黄皮书后期有一个付费批改作文的服务,我在去年十月份的时候买了,能批改3篇大作文加三篇小作文,价格也蛮划算。后期12月份我再去看,价格好像涨到了一百多,所以提醒大家一下,提前购买比较划算,怕忘记的同学也可以关注学长公众号(顾不得考研),到时候会通知大家。
10年和18年的两篇作文,学长拿去张剑老师那边改,分别是19分和18分,15年忘了,好像是18分,反正都很满意。此后信心大增,作文算是吃下来了,12月份就可以把更多的时间放在专业课和政治背诵上。
Everybody grows up with fairy tales. Before they sleep, their parents read stories to them. Fairy tales have great influence on many people’s career, especially the directors and writers. They create new stories on the basis of these classic fairy tales. These fictional world brings something positive to people.
童话故事伴随着每个人的成长。父母一般会在小孩睡觉之前给他们读故事。童话对很多人的职业生涯有很大的影响,尤其是导演和作家,他们以这些经典童话故事为基础创造新的故事。这些虚构的世界给人们带来了积极的影响。
Fairy tales picture a wonderful world for children. In the imaginary world, children can find a lot things that they have never seen in the real life. Such as the animals who can talk, or the aliens walk in another planet. All of these provide the young people a wide vision of life, which gives them the passion and inspiration to create new things.
童话给孩子们刻画了一个美妙的世界。在虚构的世界里,孩子们可以找到很多他们从未在现实生活中见到的事物。如:会说话的动物,或者外星人。所有这些都给年轻人提供了宽广的视野去看待生活,可以赋予他们激情和灵感去创造新事物。
The most important value of fairy tales is to show children the way to see the world. In the stories, family love and friendship are always the main themes. The protagonists fight against the evil forces with the support of their families and friends. They win in the end and grow up as the strong people. This shows the children never to give up and success will come.
童话故事最重要的意义在于给孩子们展示看世界的方式。在故事中,亲情和友谊总是主题。主人公对抗邪恶力量,最后在家人和朋友的帮助下取得胜利,成长为强大的人。这给孩子们展示了只要不放弃,成功就会到来。
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