假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3. 希望获准。
注意: 1. 数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a have a rule for my daughter:be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or has been doing very well in school,but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on l wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议。
要求:1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于l00(不含已写好的部分)。
3.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。
4.书写须清晰、工整。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Hi,Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents inChina. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude at school never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A student in school have turned out not to be ac successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make takes of her own as we teenagers often do.
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生,利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给校评选组写一封申请信:
1. 对此活动的认识(如对本人、学生及社会的益处等)
2. 个人优势(如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等)
3. 你的计划(如怎样进行辅导等)
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
参考词汇:晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.
I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【篇首句】说明写信目的。
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
1. I'd like to suggest that...
我想要建议......
2. In my opinion,...
在我看来,......
3. If I were you, I would...
如果我是你,我会......
4. You'd better do.../not do...
你最好/最好不......
5. It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前,你 有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识,你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。
6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.
首先,你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。
7. As is known to all,vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
众所周知,词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。
8. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
还有,试着在课外用英语和同学交流。只有这样,你才能够很快的提高英语听力和口语。
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
最后但也是很重要的一点是,你应该养成记日记的习惯,这会帮助你提高英语写作,也会帮助你复习学过的单词和短语。
【篇尾句】提出希望采纳建议,并祝福。
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
(给你)最美好的祝愿!
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。
7. I hope you can take good consideration of my advice. I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
我希望你可以好好考虑我的建议。我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
8. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. I'm eager to see you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。很希望早点在北京见到你。提前祝你来北京之行愉快。
【篇首句】介绍自己,简要说明信息来源,并提出申请。
1. I'm Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two.
我是李华,来自高二一班。
2. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.
我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。
3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息,我对此很感兴趣。
4. I am extremly pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor(家庭教师/助教)in the newspaper.
我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。
5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.
我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。
6. I am writing to tell you that I'm suitable for the job you are advertising.
我写信是想告诉你,我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。
7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.
我写信是询问(我得到)这份工作的`可能性。
8. I am writing to join the program.
我写信是想加入这个项目。
9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation.
我想要暑假申请它。
【篇中句】突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由。
1. I think I'm qualified for the position.
我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。
2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.
首先,我有很好的写作和交流技巧。
3. What's more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.(be acquainted with 熟悉)
而且,我非常熟悉西方文化。
4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.
最后但也是很重要的一点是,我有很好的性格,并且在生活中很独立。
5. I think it's of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.
我认为它对我是有好处的。一则,我能够为未来的工作获得经验;二则,我可以交到更多的朋友。
6. I am sure I can do my best in the job.
我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。
7. That's why I am applying for the position.
那就是我申请这个职位的原因。
8. I hope I can join you.
我希望我能够加入你们。
【篇尾句】请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.
如果你能给我这个机会,我会非常感激。
2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.
我希望你能提供给我这个机会。
3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。
4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189......
如果你需要了解我更多,请给我打电话189......
5. I am looking forward to your early reply.
期待你的早日恢复。
6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
期待早日收到你的来信。
1. 道歉信结构
道歉信通常包括三部分内容:1.表示歉意,道歉的原由;2.出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。
2. 道歉信模板
Dear ______,
①I am truly sorry that ______(道歉的原因).
②The reason is that ______(介绍原因). ③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
④Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3. 道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话
I am writing this letter to express my regret…
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾......
I am writing to apologize for…
我写信是为......道歉。
I would like to give you my apology for…
我想为......向你道歉。
I am very sorry to say that…
我很抱歉......
I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
对于做了/没做......,我必须道歉。
Please accept my sincere apology for…
请接受我对于......的真诚道歉。
I am writing to say sorry for…
我写信是想对......说抱歉。
I am terribly sorry, but…
我很抱歉,但是......
4. 道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
Please allow me to say sorry again.
请允许我再一次说抱歉。
Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.
很抱歉我不能......,但我相信,你会理解的。
拓展阅读:高考英语应用文写作技巧大全
应用文——日记
【思路点拨】 日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中,人们会对事件发表议论,阐述一下自己的态度或体会。日记中所记录的事情可以自己的直接经历也可以说描述他人的事情。日记的种类有很多种,从体裁角度,可以分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。日记的篇章结构可以从以下几个角度入手:首先要对所发生的事件或现象进行描述。按照事件发展的先后顺序进行,适当添加对天气或景物或心情的描述。其次要发表感想或议论,针对事件进行感悟或议论性的描述,以使文章有所立意。最后要对未来提出展望或推测,或表示决心、态度、观点、意图、希冀等。
【点津提示】 在写作日记时,要注意以下几点:
1.格式:一般是在左上角记上当天日期,星期,时间的排列法与书信一致,星期写在日期之后;右上角写上当天的天气情况,表示天气情况的词一般是形容词,如:fine (晴朗的), cold (寒冷的), snowy(下雪的), sunny(阳光充足的), rainy(下雨的), cloudy(阴天的)等。日记的小标题写在下一行, 也可省略不写。
2.时态:写日记的时间一般是在下午、晚上,有时也可以在第二天补写。因此,日记中所记述的事情通常发生在过去,常用一般过去时;但当记述天气、描写景色或展望未来时,可以用一般现在时或一般将来时。
3.写法:写法大致和写汉语日记相同,都是在正文之前有日期、星期几及当天的天气情况。注意内容表达要清楚连贯、准确。
【写作模板】
March 8, 2013 Friday Sunny
Today / This ______, I went to ______. At first , I______, because ______. Then , I ______ and I found that ______. At last / In the end / Finally, I ______ . Through the ______ , I ______. In the process of ______, I learned from it that only if ______ , I will ______. And I hope ______.
【常用句式】
afternoon / Today, we held a discussion about ....今天下午/今天,我们举行了对…的讨论。
offered to do ....她主动提出要……
am willing to do ....我情愿去做……
to do ... rather than do ... / prefer doing ... to doing ....宁愿干某事而不愿干某事
the process, we learned that ....在这一过程中,我们学到了……
doing ..., we have a better understanding of life.通过做…,我们对生活有了更好的理解。
find that forming a good habit is very important.我发现养成良好的习惯是非常重要的。
feel like doing ....我想做某事……
made a decision to do sth..我下定决心要干某事。
have a strong desire to do sth..我非常渴望干某事。
应用文——书信
【思路点拨】 书信(letter)是用以交涉事务、联络友谊、交流思想的重要工具。高中阶段的信函主要包括私人信件(Personal letters)、公务信件(Business letters)两种。公务信函,一般是用来处理或讨论重要事务的信件,包括邀请信(Invitation letters)、感谢信(Thanks letters)、道歉信(Letters of Apologies)、祝贺信(Letters of Congratulations)等。英语信函主要包含“信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名”等六个部分。
1.信头。信头由寄信人地址和日期组成。通常写在第一页的右上角。首行可以缩进也可以齐头写;行尾标点符号可以省略。
2.信内地址:包括收信人的姓名和地址。一般写在信纸的左上角。其格式和发信人的姓名、地址一样。
3.称呼:位于收信人地址之下的一至二行,顶格写起,自成一行。多用Dear ...,My dear ...等形式。
4.正文:是书信的主体,是写信人同收信人要谈论的主要内容。
5.结尾:结尾部分多用一些祝愿性的或表示问候的语言,如With my best wishes / regards等。一般是与正文结束后隔两行另起,对立成行,位于信纸的右角,或略居中右方。
6.签名:签名的位置一般是在结尾下面的一至二行处。除了对熟悉或亲密的人外,签名必须写全名。
【点津提示】
1.英语中书信的地址和中文的不同,英文地址要由小到大,依次是门牌号、街道名、城市名、州(省)、邮编,最后是国家名。如:
No. 188, Chaoyang Road
Beijing, 100069, China
2.日期的写法可以说“日、月、年”或“月、日、年”。如:30 Jan., 2012 / Jan. 30, 2012
3.收信人的姓名和地址写在信封的中央靠右的位置,先写姓名,后写地址,通常用并列式,左边对齐。
4.写信人的姓名和地址写在信封的左上角或信封背面的口盖上,也是先写姓名,后写地址。姓名也可以不写。
【常用句式】
for your letter ....感谢你上一封信……
am writing to express my thanks for ....我写这封信的目的是为了…….
this letter , I will tell you something about ....在这封信中,我将告诉你一些关于……
would like to take this opportunity to express my apology to you ....
我想借此写信的机会向你表达我的歉意…
am writing to invite you to ....我写信想邀请您……
wonder if you like to ....我在想你是否……
hope you can make it.我真地希望你能够成功。
am looking forward to hearing from you.我会一直期待你的来信。
let me know if you ....请让我知道你是否……
do you think about ..., can you tell me ...?关于…你是如何认为的?你能告诉我…吗?
【篇首句】介绍自己,说明写作目的:投诉。
1. I’m Li Hua. I feel bad to trouble you but I’m afraid that I have to make a complaint about your restaurant.
我是李华。很不想给你添麻烦。但是,恐怕我不得不对你们餐馆进行投诉。
2. I’m writing to you to complain about...
我写信是投诉......
3. I want to express my dissatisfaction about the woolen scarf I bought from your company.
我想要表达我对从你们公司买的羊毛围巾的不满。
【篇中句】说明投诉问题、后果,并提出合理建议。
1. In the first place, the food is too salty and the water isn't served in time. In addition, the music you broadcast is too noisy. Under these circumstances, I find it hard to sit here having dinner quietly.
首先,食物太咸,水没有及时端上来。而且,你们播放的音乐太吵了。在这样的环境下,我很难安静的坐在这里吃饭。
2. While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green shirt for 300 HK dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it. When it's washed, it fades in colour. Now I can't wear it.
大概一周前我在香港度假的时候,我在你们店里花300港元买了一件绿色衬衫,但是看上去似乎有一些状况。当被洗的时候,它会掉色。现在,我不能穿了。
3. It arrived on time the day before yesterday. But when I checked it, I found a hole in the middle. I was astonished because the hole was obvious and I didn't think you should neglect this deficiency(缺陷).
它是前天按时到的。但是当我检查时,我发现中间有个洞。我很震惊,因为这个洞和明显,我认为你们不应该忽略这个缺陷。
4. I have dialed your service number for several times but it was always busy.
我多次拨打你们的服务电话,但它总是占线。
5. Now this problem keeps worrying me.
现在这个问题一直在困扰我。
6. To improve the situation, you can take the following measures.
为了改善状况,你们可以采取下面的措施。
7. Can you change a new one for me as soon as possible?
你们可以尽快给我换件新的吗?
8. I insist you change a new one for me or give me a refund(退款).
我坚持你们给我换件新的或者给我退款。
9. How shall I send this scarf back to you?
我怎么把这条围巾寄还给你?
【篇尾句】希望给予考虑,并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Thanks for your consideration.
感谢你的考虑。
2. I hope you will give due attention to this matter.
我希望你给予此事应有的重视。
3. I believe you will take my complaint seriously.
我相信你会认真考虑我的投诉。
4. I’ll appreciate it if my demand is met.
如果我的要求被满足,我会非常感激。
5. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
期待着你早日答复。
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,
内容主要包括: 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者
2.赞赏该报优点:1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事
3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语己为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Editor-in-Chief,
Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.
There are many advantages of Global Mirror. Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news. By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.
As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language. Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.
Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular. Thank you for your time!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
建议信
假定你是李华,你的好友Jim在暑假期间痴迷于微信朋友圈,经常发照片分享生活中的所有细节,请根据以下要点提示,给Jim写一封信:(1)对分享行为表示理解;(2)阐述过度分享的危害;(3)提出建议。
Dear Jim,I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to sharing all sorts of photos in WeChat circle recently. There is no doubt that WeChat makes communication convenient and our spare time colorful. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare it. One severe problem is letting out privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing , we should never post our personal information in WeChat circle, and nor should we add strangers to the list of friends randomly. It’s wiser to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua
【篇首句】引起注意。
1. Hello, everybody/everyone.
2. Ladies and gentlemen.
3. May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
请注意,好吗?我要通知一件事情。
4. Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.
请注意!我有重要的事情要告诉你们。
(此步句型虽少,但都是精华哦!)
【篇中句】主要内容。
1. There will be a party/speech/contest held by the English Department in the hall of the library on Saturday evening.
周六晚上,在图书馆大厅,英语系将会举行一场聚会/演讲/比赛。
2. In order to welcome our friends from the United States, the Student Union will organize a party in the school hall on Saturday evening, August 15.
为了欢迎我们来自美国的朋友,学生会将会在8月15号星期六晚上组织一场聚会。
3. Our school has decided to hold an activity to climb Xiangshan Hill this Sunday.
我们学校决定这周六组织去爬香山。
4. It will begin at 5 pm and last about two hours.
它将在下午5点开始,持续大约2个小时。
5. The school will arrange several buses to take us there.
学校会安排几辆公交车带我们去那里。
6. There will colourful activities then, such as singing, dancing, exchanging gifts with one another and so on.
到时会有丰富多彩的活动,比如唱歌、跳舞、互换礼物等等。
7. All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
所有的老师和学生都被要求参加。请带上笔记本做笔记。请认真聆听,之后我们会有分组讨论。
【篇尾句】要求/邀请参加+注意事项。
1. Those who are interested in the activity are welcom.
欢迎对此活动感兴趣的人参加。
2. Those who want to take part in it please sign up at the Student Union.
想要参加的人请在学生会报名。
3. Please come and join in it. Everyone is welcom to attend it.
请来参加。每个人都是受欢迎的。
4. Remember to take your hats and gloves.
记得带上你的帽子和手套。
5. Remember that we are required hats and water.
记得我们被要求带帽子和水。
6. Please come on time and don’t be late.
请准时到来,不要迟到。
7. You might as well take a camera in case you want to take some photos of the beautiful scenery.
你不妨带个相机以防你想要给美丽的风景拍照。
8. Please pass on this message to those who are not here today.
请把这个消息告诉不在场的人。
9. I hope that you will have a nice time there.
我希望你在那里过得愉快。
10. I am sure you will have a good time there/then.
我保证你在那里/到时会过得愉快。
11. I believe you will have a wonderful time then.
我相信到时你会过得非常愉快。
12. I think you will enjoy it very much.
我想你会非常喜欢它的。
13. There's sure to be a lot of fun. Everyone is welcome.
一定会有很多的乐趣。大家都是受欢迎的。
14. Good luck.
祝好运。
15. That's all. Thank you.
我说完了。谢谢!
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