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雅思写作大作文范文解析(推荐31篇)



雅思写作大作文范文解析 第1篇

Of course, international efforts have done a fine job of moving away from petrol-based consumption. Countries which align with Paris Agreement, for example, have established carbon neutrality targets, with new markets flourishing in recycling sector. With more governments and corporations concerning zero-carbon solutions, the outlook of less dependence on carbon fuels may look rosy. But this draconian cut on fossil use may backfire; cobalt—a necessary component of vehicle batteries—is a defining example of the mineral conundrum. Numerous studies have demonstrated the close connection between worker exploitation in the cobalt mining industry and a number of environmental problems, including elevated radioactivity levels and hazardous chemicals seeping into the subterranean water system. As such, questions linger over so-called carbon justice on our decarbonization pilgrimage.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第2篇

Write about the following topic:

Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.

Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

Model Answer:

Generally, people read newspapers to find out about world current affairs and they read magazines to be entertained. Therefore, one would expect to find articles that feature the private lives of famous people in magazines rather than newspapers. However, nowadays, more and more newspapers include stories like these which are neither informative nor useful.

In my opinion, this type of gossip about people's private lives should not be in newspapers for several reasons. Firstly, for example, the fact that Princess Diana is going out with a sportsman is not important news. Secondly, if newspapers want to publish articles about famous people they should focus on their public events and achievements. In other words, if there is an article about Princess Diana it should be about her works of charity, which will increase public awareness of important problems. In addition, journalists should make sure that they write about the facts only, not rumours. One should be able to rely on newspapers for the actual truth.

Magazines, on the other hand, focus on social news. But I feel it is more acceptable for them to contain some features about famous personalities. In addition to being popular reading, these stories often benefit the stars by giving free publicity to them, thereby helping their careers. However, I also believe that magazine stories should not mention things that are too embarrassing or untrue just to attract people to buy the magazine. Sensational stories, such as these, cause great unhappiness to the people concerned.

In conclusion, I think newspapers should concentrate on real news but magazines can feature some articles on people's private lives.

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雅思写作大作文范文解析 第3篇

Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on your personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

Which do you consider to be the major influence? (2012年5月真题)

Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance ofinherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).

Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. it seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.

My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. Instead, the traits, we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences we have in life are constantly interacting. It is the interacting of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.

In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第4篇

The newspaper will remain to be an important source of people’s news consumption, even though other media may get the upper hand. Many predict that the print’s days are numbered due to strong competition from television, radio and the Internet. In terms of popularity, newspaper is statistically down but is not emotionally out.

尽管其他媒体可能占上风,但报纸仍将是人们新闻消费的重要来源。许多人预测,由于来自电视、收音机和互联网的激烈竞争,印刷品的日子已经屈指可数了。就受欢迎程度而言,报纸在统计意义上会下降,但在情感上却不会出局。

Statistically, it can be said that the print news audiences are dwindling, which means newspaper readership is getting eclipsed by other ways of learning about news. It is a long, slow and painful downward spiral to the point that the newspaper, like vinyl records and film cameras, is a relic for collectors. According to research reports on the news industry, local television is the number one source of news for the majority of people, with digital news coming in second, followed by the radio, and then by the newspaper. One possible explanation why the newspaper is being left far behind is that many people do not see the point in buying a print newspaper if they believe they can get all the news they need elsewhere for free.

从统计上说,印刷新闻的受众正在减少,这意味着报纸的读者群正在被其他的新闻获取方式所蚕食。这是一个漫长、缓慢和痛苦下降螺旋线,最后报纸会像乙烯基唱片和胶卷相机一样,成为收藏家的古物。根据新闻业的研究报告,本地电视台是大多数人的第一新闻渠道,数字化新闻排在第二位,其次是电台,最后是报纸。报纸被远远抛在后面的一个可能的解释是,如果人们相信可以从其他地方免费获取新闻,那么花钱买报纸是没有意义的。

Nevertheless, for emotional reasons print newspapers will continue to exist for a good while. To begin with, the feeling of a warm newspaper right off the press is one of traditional readers’ favorite moments to begin a regular day. Unlike other ways of delivering news, a print newspaper can be physically held in a reader’s hands, and this is a huge pro for print editions. In addition, newspapers can provide opportunities for longer, more in-depth feature articles that tend to be read in full. Instead of becoming a thing of the past, print newspapers are still widely read and preferred by many audiences.

尽管如此,由于情感原因,印刷报纸仍将继续存在一段时间。首先,传统读者的日常一天就是拿到一份刚出炉的报纸那个温暖时刻开始的。与其他的新闻传递方式不同,纸质报纸可以拿在读者手中,这是印刷版新闻的最大优势。此外,报纸还可以刊登更长、更深入的特写文章,供读者全文阅读。因此,印刷版报纸没有成为过去时,仍被广泛阅读,并被众多读者喜欢。

In conclusion, the golden days of print news are gone forever, but nothing is like the feeling of physically holding a newspaper in hands. After all, the different ways of learning about news are not mutually exclusive. Each news media outlet is effective in its own way. (338 words)

总之,印刷新闻的黄金时代已经一去不返了,但没有什么比手拿报纸的感觉更好了。毕竟,获知新闻的不同方式之间并不相互排斥,每一种新闻媒体都以其自己的方式产生作用。

雅思写作高分表达

news media 新闻媒体

news consumption 新闻消费

to get the upper hand 占上风

to predict 预测

the days are numbered 日子不多了

the news industry 新闻业

to see the point 看出道理

for a good while 一段时间

not mutually exclusive 互不排斥

雅思写作大作文范文:儿童观看广告

真题范文:There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(有许多针对儿童的广告,如零食、玩具和其他商品。家长们认为孩子们处于压力之下。广告商声称广告提供有用的信息。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

雅思写作大作文题目讲解

此次大作文考察的为广告类话题,也是一道老题目。题目中提出了对立双方:父母认为孩子们比较受广告影响,从而产生一定压力;广告商则认为广告本身能够提供大量有用信息。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第5篇

The bar chart compares 4 categories of domestic waste in terms of their recycling proportion in one specific city over a decade from1992 to 2002.

从1992年到,在一个特定的城市里,在一个特定的城市里,在一个特定的城市里,他们的回收比例是4个类别。

Generally, it can be seen that the household sectors had relatively low recycling rates in 1992 especially for plastic as merely 11% of it was collected. The remaining three kinds of trash including cans, paper and glass stood at an almost equal percentage 13%.

一般来说,1992年,家庭部门的回收率相对较低,特别是塑料,仅占其中的11%。剩下的三种垃圾,包括罐头、纸和玻璃,几乎都是13%。

Five years later, the situation turned better off. There was a moderate increase in the amount of plastic and paper reused. While the rise was particularly noticeable in glass which nearly doubled in its recycling, a slight drop was actually found in cans.

五年后,情况变得更好了,塑料和纸张的重复使用适度增加。虽然这种上升在玻璃中尤其明显,但在回收过程中几乎翻了一倍,但在罐头中却发现了轻微的下降。

The following half decade witnessed an overall upward trend except plastic which kept constant at about 12%. More cans and paper were recycled, with the proportion reaching more than 20% and almost 30% respectively. Also noteworthy is that glass remained the principal waste materials, approaching to as high as one half.

在接下来的五年里,除了塑料,它一直保持着大约12%的稳定。更多的罐头和纸被回收,这一比例分别达到了20%和近30%。同样值得注意的是,玻璃仍然是主要的废料,接近一半。

Overall, the gap between these waste recycling had enlarged in these years and while the vast quantities of glass and paper were recycled , plastic and cans remained unpopular.

总的来说,这些年来垃圾回收的差距扩大了,尽管大量的玻璃和纸张被回收,塑料和罐头仍然不受欢迎。

月10日雅思大作文写作7分范文:职场社交能力重要性

年11月10日的雅思大作文写作题目是:Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思大作文解析

今天的考题是一个旧题,重复的是1月14日的考题,不过由于过于久远,想必很多同学都没有复习到。但这个题目的问题,我们多数同学都应该思考过,即到底文凭重要,还是社交能力重要?

就这个问题,我们的思考方向依然是三种:

A. 双边讨论:认为两者都很重要

B. 一边倒讨论:只认为文凭更重要,或社交能力更重要

C. 批判思维:对某些工作而言,文凭更重要,而对其他工作而言,社交能力更重要。

考生可以在以上思维方式中任选一个进行写作。

以下是老雅的高分范文。本范文中,老雅遵从主流意见,认为文凭和社交能力都重要。本题还应注意的是,要结合“招聘”来讨论问题。老雅认为,在招聘的时候,文凭很重要,因为文凭背后代表的是求职者具有某种能力,而没有文凭,应聘者可能连面试的机会都得不到;同时,社交能力也很重要,因为这种能力意味着求职者可以和各种人和谐快乐地相处,从而提高工作效率。

请大家认真阅读范文,看老雅是如何把以上思路落实到具体文字表达的。

It is important for job seekers to highlight both their professional qualifications and social skills. Employers are looking to hire those who have the right mix of professional qualifications as hard skills and social skills as soft skills.

(1) 本段开门见山,直接表明观点,即专业资质和社交能力同等重要。本作文采取双边讨论的结构。重要的是如何分别论述专业资质和社交能力的重要性。

(2) Highlight 高亮;强调

(3) Professional 专业的;职业的

(4) Look to do... 希望做......

(5) Mix 混合

On the one hand, hard skills are most important to any job, and the expertise required to do a job is always listed in job postings and job descriptions. That is why those job seekers with perfect certifications and licenses are preferred by their potential employers, for they indicate that their owners possess the sought-after knowledge and them, landing an interview or even getting past applicant tracking systems will become next to impossible. After all, in the job market, nothing can beat the importance of hard skills.

(1) 本段主要论述求职中工作技能的重要性:求职者必须拥有证明其具有某种工作技能的证书和执照。

(2) Expertise 专业知识

(3) Job description 职位描述

(4) Potential 潜在的

(5) Sought-after 急需的

(6) Next to impossible 几乎不可能

(7) Nothing can beat the importance of... 没有什么比......更为重要

Soft skills, on the other hand, are emotional abilities that are useful for an individual to stand out among other job applicants. While hard skills can be learned through proper training, soft skills are harder to develop. And this partly explains why soft skills are extremely valuable these days. Indeed, such emotional traits are so valuable that almost every employer looks for job candidates who are skilled in identifying emotions, using emotions, and regulating emotions. With good soft skills, one is able to connect emotionally with his/her co-workers, clients and superiors as one will look and feel more comfortable and therefore more confident and efficient in job situations.

(1) 本段主要论述社交能力的重要性。首先定义社交能力,然后论述它为什么重要。

(2) Stand out 突出

(3) Partly 部分地

(4) Valuable 有价值的

(5) Identify 识别

(6) Regulate 调节

(7) Superior 上级

In conclusion, the two types of skills are not mutually exclusive as both of them are equally important in the job market. As far as employment is concerned, there is no “either/or” question since the answer must necessarily be both.

(1) 总结前面的主要观点,强调两者都很重要。

(2) Mutually exclusive 相互排斥

(3) Employment 工作

(4) Necessarily 一定地

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第6篇

There is a strange trend that while some people have to struggle to fight hunger,many consumers, especially in some developed countries, throw away as much as half of the food they purchase from shops and restaurants. Both overbuying and food spoilage are two principal drivers of the food waste.

有一种奇怪的趋势,当一些人不得不与饥饿作斗争时,许多消费者,特别是在一些发达国家,扔掉了他们从商店和餐馆购买的食物的一半。过度购买和食物腐败是造成食物浪费的两个主要原因。

Buying food way more than people really need without detailed plan contributes to food loss. This is mainly because with marketing ploy becoming so attractive and lucrative , most consumers are more likely to do impulse and bulk food purchases especially when retailers sell unusual production and provide different tempting sales promotion so as to lure their clients to buy their products. What is worse, the food bought in shops and restaurants, in most cases, hardly fit into their regular meal plans and therefore spoil before they can be consumed. With income rising to unforeseen levels, diners now seem to increase their portion sizes significantly than ever before , and thus leave some of their meals uneaten , and make half of edible leftovers left at the restaurants, an extravagant consumerism that must be discouraged.

在没有详细计划的情况下购买超过人们实际需要的食物会导致食物的损失。这主要是因为随着营销策略变得如此诱人和有利可图,大多数消费者更有可能冲动和批量购买食品,特别是当零售商销售不同寻常的产品,提供不同的诱人的促销活动,以吸引他们的客户购买他们的产品。更糟糕的是,在商店和餐馆买的食物,在大多数情况下,很难符合他们的日常饮食计划,因此在他们可以消费之前变质。随着收入增长到无法预料的水平,用餐者现在似乎比以往任何时候都要大大增加他们的份量,因此,他们会留下一些食物不吃,并把餐馆里剩下的可食用的剩菜做成一半,这种奢侈的消费主义必须加以制止。

Food spoilage is also responsible for this negative trend. After snapping up food in shops and restaurants, most of food have to be stored yet due to improper storage, lack of visibility in refrigerators, partially used ingredients and misjudged food needs, some food probably become less nutritious,inedible, or even rotten so that they have to be discarded before being used instead.

食物腐败也是这种消极趋势的原因。抢购食品商店和餐馆后,大多数的食物还存储由于储存不当,缺乏能见度冰箱、部分使用成分和低估了粮食需求,一些食物可能变得不那么有营养,不能食用,甚至腐烂的所以,在使用之前,他们必须被丢弃。

Different organisations should assume the responsibility for changing the way people consume the food they buy. Government could make laws to force shops and restaurants to sell a reasonable amount of food according to the average level;otherwise they will be fined seriously and even face criminal responsibility. At the same time, consumers themselves must raise the awareness that they had better not only buy food rationally and reasonably but also be frugal. In other words, what is by far most important is that they need to eat responsibly. As long as they consume food properly, the food waste will be prevented and even eliminated.

不同的组织应该承担起改变人们购买食物的消费方式的责任。政府可以制定法律强制商店和餐馆按照平均水平销售合理数量的食物,否则将被处以严重罚款,甚至面临刑事责任。与此同时,消费者自己也必须提高意识,他们最好不仅合理合理地购买食品,而且要节俭。换句话说,到目前为止最重要的是他们需要负责任地吃东西。只要他们正确地消费食物,食物浪费就会被阻止,甚至消除。

To sum up, the reason why people waste too much food is over-consumption and improper storage and the fundamental solution lies in empowering and encouraging consumers to change their way of eating food.

综上所述,人们浪费太多食物的原因是过度消费和储存不当,根本的解决办法在于赋予和鼓励消费者改变他们的饮食方式。

1月17日雅思小作文写作真题及高分范文之不同观光地的逐年游客数对比

原题是:The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to the main attractions in a European country in 1981, 1991 and .

TASK 1

题目:The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to the main attractions in a European country in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

类型:柱状图、动态图

考点/写作要点:

注意题目的改写:’in 1981、1991 and 200’ 一共二十年的时间,可以改写为20-year- period或者two decades.

时态要选用过去时+现在完成时

建议同学不要按照年份进行逐一描述,会使得文章结构松散,趋势变化不明显,无法突出重点;

可以把柱状图看作是线图进行描述,即在单个柱图的顶端画一个点,然后把每个点连接起来变成线图,用这个方法可以直观的看到数据的上升/下降/不变的趋势;

首先可以从人数最多的central amusement park开始描述其二十年的趋势;

呈上升趋势的:national park; national gallery (每十年就几乎又一倍的增长);

呈下降趋势的:science park;

无明显趋势变化:central zoo

范文:

The bar charts give information about how many travelers have visited five tourist destinations in a European country and how this number has changed in two decades.

这些柱状图显示了在一个欧洲国家有多少游客去过五个旅游目的地,以及这个数字在过去二十年中发生了怎样的变化。

It is noticeable that Central amusement park was the most attractive tourist spot with 25 million people visiting in 1981. Though this figure dropped to 20 million in 1991, it reclined to 22 million a decade later. Another noticeable finding is that in one decade (1981-1991), the number of people visiting the National Park witnessed a dramatical increase from 10 million to 15 million. This climb slowed down in the next decade with an increase of only 2 million people.

值得注意的是,中央游乐园是1981年最具吸引力的旅游景点,有2500万游客。虽然这个数字在1991年下降到2 000万人,但十年后又下降到2 200万人。另一项值得注意的发现是,在十年内(1981-1991年),参观国家公园的人数从1 000万急剧增加到1 500万。在接下来的十年里,这一增长速度放缓,只增加了200万人。

A similar trend has been found in the increase of travelers to the National Gallery. In 1981, only 7 million people chose to visit that attraction. However, this figure was almost doubled in 10-years’ time. It continued to grow under the similar speed, in 2001, more than 20 million people have visited the National Gallery.

同样的趋势也出现在国家美术馆游客的增加上。1981年,只有700万人选择参观这个景点。然而,这一数字在内几乎翻了一番。它继续以同样的速度增长,在,超过万人参观了国家美术馆。

The figure has shown little change in the Science Park. In 1981, only 7 million people have visited that place. After experiencing a slight increase, the number continued to drop and reached 6 million in 2001. Similarly, the figure for Central Zoo remained stable, with just 5 million of visitors going there for two decades, which makes it the least attractive tourist spot for people.

这个数字在科技园几乎没有变化。1981年,只有700万人去过那个地方。在经历了小幅增长之后,这个数字继续下降,在20达到了600万。同样,中央动物园的数字保持稳定,来只有500万游客去那里,这使得它成为最不吸引人的旅游景点。

201月17日雅思大作文写作7分范文 对于食物的浪费问题,我们应该怎样解决

年1月17日的雅思写作考试已经结束,为大家带来本场雅思大作文写作真题:食物的浪费已经成为一个越来越严重的问题,我们应该怎样解决它?In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?范文来自网络。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第7篇

题目:Advantages and disadvantages of private cars.

范文:With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.

Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.

However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.

雅思写作私家车利弊话题写作思路

Topic:As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Does the advantage of this for individuals outweigh the disadvantage?私家车的利弊

开头段:简单介绍文章背景,私家车的数量大幅增长,因此私家车到底好还是不好引发了很多的争议。

Although modern information technologies can reduce the demand for physical transport by facilitating teleworking and teleservices, the requirement for transport continues to increase. The number of car use on the roads saw an increase of 3 million cars each year from 1990 to , and in the next decade the EU will see a further substantial increase in its feet. (原话稍作修改,用在这里)Therefore, the issue of whether private cars bring us more benefits or drawbacks has been heatedly debated.

主体段第一段: 论述私家车的好处,方便了人们的通勤,让人们不用在依赖固定行程的公共交通。

Granted, the advantages of having private cars are undeniable. Having your own car provide you with a great deal of freedom. Automobiles have redefined the concept of mobility for millions of people. Personal independence derived from having a car means that people can go for shopping, work and pursuit whenever and at anytime without depending on fixed schedules of public transportation systems. Most importantly, it is more efficient for commuters to come and go back between their home and workplaces on a daily basis.

主体段第二段:开始论述私家车的坏处一,产生了大量的二氧化碳,而二氧化碳又是造成温室效应的主要气体,对人们的健康也会有威胁。

However, energy consumption in the transport sector was to blame for a large amount of CO2 emissions, the leading gas of greenhouse effect. This is partly because of the substantial increase of private car ownership. The emission of gas will be capable of causing death in large doses and headaches in smaller doses. According to the latest estimates, if nothing is done to reverse the traffic growth trend, CO2 emission from private automobiles can be expected to increase by around 50% to 1113 billion tones by , compared with the 739 billion tones recorded in 1990.(稍作修改,用做私家车坏处的论据)

主体段第三段:论述私家车的坏处二,会造成水污染。

Furthermore, cars pollute water sources in a variety of ways. One is through runoff of automobile fluids, brake dust, deicing chemicals and oil. Another is through leaking pumps at gas stations. Improper disposal of motor oil is also a cause of ground water contamination.

主体段第四段:论述私家车的坏处三,也会造成城市交通堵塞。

Finally,the determining impact is the large volume of traffic, resulting in traffic congestion, especially during rush hours.(原话稍作修改,用在这里)Currently, more citizens can afford to purchase private cars, which offer them great convenience. Instead of taking unpunctual buses or overcrowded metro to work, people now have the alternative to commute in their own cars. Undeniably, this new trend inevitably deteriorates the traffic situation.(上文用过的论据,这里也可以用)

结尾段:总结上文,所以为了解决这一问题,使用替代燃料以提升能源效率和改革道路政策既是生态的需要,也是技术的挑战。同时为了实现这一模式的转变,人们必须做出更多努力。这样的转变不是一夜之间就可以实现的,毕竟半个多世纪以来公路的状况持续恶化。

Therefore, the over-crowding of city roads is the result of unbalanced urban development. Using alternative fuels to improve energy efficiency and reforming the road policy is thus both an ecological necessarily and a technological challenge. At the same time, greater efforts must be made to achieve a modal shift. Such a change cannot be achieved overnight, all the less so after over half a century of constant deterioration in favor of road.(原句用在这里)

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第8篇

随着儿童成长为广告业的目标群体,产生了一系列针对这些广告的广告,引起了社会的一些争议。

As children grow to be the target group of advertisement industry, a range of advertisements aimed at them have been produced, which had caused some controversies in the society.

Those who advocate the spread of advertising targeted at children deem that these advertisements can provide potential customers with a comprehensive understanding of the products advertised, which can help consumers make well-informed buying decisions. Since television advertisements can present goods in a visual and audio way, this can definitely enhance people’s knowledge of the advertised goods, especially some electronic toys or newly-introduced food.

On the other hand, parents are concerned that children are easily attracted by the vivid advertisement from the Internet or television, and because of it, kids will pester their parents to buy the goods advertised. Obviously, children are a group of consumers without the ability to distinguish good from bad and right from wrong. If they are convinced of the benefits of the products from the advertisement, they will not consider the negative aspects or further explore the truth of the advertisement itself.

Besides, peer pressure is another point which needs to be mentioned here. The widespread advertising campaign will make the public overwhelmed by these advertisements, which means there will always be some parents and children purchasing the advertised goods, and therefore, some psychological factor of children may urge a part of them to obtain the products even though they may not need the goods.

Personally, advertisements themselves contain a lot of information which can be quite useful for consumers. If the advertising industry can be well regulated and children being supervised when they are watching the advertisements, there is no need for parents to worry about the side effects by the widespread advertisements.

就个人而言,广告本身包含了许多对消费者非常有用的信息。如果广告业能得到很好的监管,孩子们在观看广告时受到监督,那么就没有必要担心广告的副作用。

雅思写作真题大作文合辑

1. Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly, others say that people are free to make as much as they wish. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

一些人认为人们制造噪音的数量必须严格控制,其他人则认为人们可以随心所欲地随心所欲地制造噪音。讨论双方的观点并给出你的意见。

2. Nowadays both scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

如今,科学家和游客都可以去遥远的自然环境,比如南极。你认为这种发展的好处大于坏处吗?

3. Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些人认为过多的关注和过多的资源被用于保护野生动物和鸟类。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

4. Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.

许多博物馆和历史遗迹主要是游客而不是当地人来参观的。为什么会这样,我们可以做些什么来吸引当地人。

5. Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些人认为改善道路安全的最好办法是提高驾驶汽车和摩托车的最低法定年龄。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

6. The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?

在某些地方使用手机和吸烟一样反社会。你认为手机应该像吸烟一样被禁止吗?

7. Some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

一些学生在完成学业和上大学之间的间隔一年,为的是旅行或工作。你认为优势大于劣势吗?

8. Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?

有些人认为在城镇的空地上种植更多的树木比建造更多的房屋更重要。对于什么扩展,同意或不同意?

9. Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide best care for their children, while others think of other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

一些有工作的家长认为,育儿中心可以为孩子提供最好的照顾,而另一些家长则认为其他家庭成员,比如祖父母可以做这项工作。讨论两种观点,并给出自己的意见。

10. Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人认为名人对国际援助组织的支持引起了人们对问题的关注,而另一些人则认为名人让问题变得不那么重要。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

11. Some people believe that the increasing use of the computers and the mobile phones has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skill,do you agree or disagree?有些人认为越来越多的使用电脑和手机对年轻人的负面影响阅读和写作技巧,你同意或不同意吗?

12. Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems do this cause? And what are the solutions?

如今,需要就业的老年人必须与年轻人竞争。这造成了什么问题?解决方案是什么?

13. Some people think only best students should be rewarded, others think we should reward students who make progress.

有些人认为只有最好的学生才应该得到奖励,而另一些人则认为我们应该奖励那些进步的学生。

14. Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

犯罪的年轻人应该像对待成人一样对待他们。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

15. In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

在一些国家,越来越多的成年人继续与父母同住,即使他们已经完成了学业并找到了工作。优势大于劣势吗?

16. Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone accepts a simpler life, while others believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

技术的发展正在引起环境问题。一些人认为解决办法是每个人都接受简单的生活,而另一些人则相信技术可以解决这些问题。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

17. To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

为了提高教育质量,人们认为我们应该鼓励学生去评价和批评他们的老师。另一些人则认为这会导致课堂上的尊重和纪律的丧失。讨论两种观点,并给出自己的意见。

18. In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

在世界上的一些国家,男人和女人在晚年生孩子。这种发展的原因是什么?对社会和家庭生活有什么影响?

19. In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their views?

在一些国家,人们认为国际旅游对他们的国家来说是件坏事。原因是什么?如何改变他们的观点?

20. Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有些人喜欢直接向当地社区的人提供帮助和支持。而另一些人则倾向于给国家和国际慈善组织捐款。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

21. As the transportation and accommodation problem increases in big cities, some governments are encouraging business move from the city to the rural area, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

随着大城市交通和住宿问题的增多,一些政府鼓励企业从城市迁往农村,你认为优势大于劣势吗?

22. In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

在一些国家,青少年犯罪行为的比例很高。这为什么会发生?我们能做些什么来解决这个问题呢?

23. Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?

许多人在家里或外出时都感觉不安全。什么是原因,什么可以做来让人们感到更安全?

24. It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?

建议所有的年轻人都应该从事一段无偿的工作来帮助社区的人们。它会给社区和年轻人带来更多的好处和坏处吗?

25. Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making them want to be or to look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

广告不鼓励我们成为不同的人,让他们想要成为或看起来一样。你同意还是不同意?

26. Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

一些人认为政府应该优先考虑医疗保健问题,有些人认为应该优先考虑更多的优先事项来支付纳税人的钱。讨论两种观点,并给出自己的意见。

27. As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

除了赚钱,企业还应该承担社会责任。你同意还是不同意?

28. The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

石油、森林和淡水等自然资源正以惊人的速度消耗着。它造成了什么问题?我们如何解决这些问题?

29. Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些在_里的人后来成了好公民。有些人认为他们是最好的人,和学校的学生谈论犯罪的危险。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

30. International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds,why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?

国际旅行有时会导致人们有一些偏见,而不是广泛的思想,为什么?如何增进对他们访问的国家的了解?

31. Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

一些人把国家间日益增长的商业和文化联系视为一种积极的发展。然而,另一些人则认为这些导致了国家身份的丧失。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

32. Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crimes. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

许多人因为害怕犯罪而不敢出门。一些人认为应该采取更多的行动来预防犯罪,但是其他人认为这是不可能的。讨论两种观点,并给出自己的意见。

33. Students in school or university learn more from classes of teachers than other resources (eg Internet or TV), do you agree or disagree?

在学校或大学里的学生比其他资源(如互联网或电视)更能从老师那里学到更多东西,你同意还是不同意?

34. Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有些人认为每个人都应该吃素,因为我们不需要吃肉来保持健康的饮食。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

35. In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials (eg. Paper, glass and cans.) What are the reasons and solutions?

在一些国家没有足够的废物回收利用(例如。纸,玻璃和罐子。)原因和解决办法是什么?

36. In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

在一些国家,中学的目标是在一系列学科上提供普通教育。在另一些方面,孩子们关注的是与特定职业相关的一小部分主题。你认为在当今的世界中,哪一个是合适的?

37. Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

一些人认为政府应该致力于减少环境污染和住房问题,以帮助人们预防疾病和疾病。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

38. Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

有人说玩电脑游戏对孩子的各个方面都不好。还有人说玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有积极的影响。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

39. Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

有些人认为从事创意艺术工作的人应该得到政府的财政支持。另一些人则认为他们应该从其他资源中获得资金支持。讨论双方的观点并给出你的意见。

40. School leavers g travelling or work before they go directly to university. Are there more advantages or disadvantages on their study?

离开学校的学生在直接上大学之前就开始旅行或工作。他们的研究有更多的优点和缺点吗?

41. For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

对学校的孩子来说,他们的老师对他们的智力和社会发展的影响要比家长大。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

42. The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

教孩子的最好方式是通过团队合作在学校体育。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

43. 题目B:Consumption of the world’s resources (such as oil, fresh water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are the causes of this increased consumption? What can people do to reduce it?

世界资源的消耗(如石油、淡水等)正以危险的速度增长。消费增加的原因是什么?人们能做些什么来减少它呢?

44. The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring professional sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

政府应该花钱在学校推广体育和艺术,而不是赞助社区的体育和艺术活动。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

45. Nowadays, more and more jobs and tasks are done by machines which involve hard physical work. Does these effects of this trend outweigh the negative effects?

政府应该花钱在学校推广体育和艺术,而不是赞助社区的体育和艺术活动。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

46. In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

在一些国家,母亲的角色在某些方面与父亲的角色有所不同。你为什么认为这些差异存在?父母的角色在未来会如何发展?

47. Nowadays, most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree?

现在,大多数人在大学里学习学术研究,但其他人认为我们应该鼓励更多地学习职业技能,你同意还是不同意?

48. Interview is the basic form of selecting procedure for most large companies. Some people think it is unreliable. There are some other better methods. Do you agree or disagree?

面试是大多数大公司选择程序的基本形式。有些人认为它不可靠。还有其他更好的方法。你同意还是不同意?

49. People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising which can influence their life. Does the positive effect of this trend outweigh negative effects?

人们被各种各样的广告所包围,这些广告会影响他们的生活。这一趋势的正面影响是否大于负面影响?

50. Some people think reading stories in book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

有些人认为在书中读故事比看电视或给孩子玩电脑游戏要好。在多大程度上你同意或不同意?

51. Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aims at tourists, other people believe that it is the only way to save such conditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

有些人认为文化传统会被破坏,当他们被用作赚钱机器的目的是为了吸引游客,其他人则认为这是在当今世界拯救这样的环境的唯一方法。讨论双方的意见,并提出自己的意见。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第9篇

While humans have made strides economically and technologically, the natural environment has become increasingly vulnerable as people cut down trees, pollute the air, water and soil. Therefore, encouraging them to assume the responsibility for protecting and preserving their own environment locally seems to be feasible but is unrealistic indeed.

If the government persuades its citizens to take care of their environment at the local level, some environmental problems will then be solved. Only if every individual in different areas choose to lead a low carbon lifestyle , for example driving less but taking public transport more and using less disposable products but reusing and recycling more, the air will be cleaner and resources on which we thrive consumed if all individuals just continue to damage the environment and take no action to change, the environment in which they reside and live will become a uninhabitable place. Without cooperation with different groups at the local level, the environment will hardly be improved.

But only pushing people to conserve the environment locally cannot address all environmental problems fundamentally. For example, the energy crisis has recently been a tricky problem for most countries, a problem that is so complex that it is beyond an individual’s ability to deal with. This is mainly because developing clean and renewable energy costs money and resources and because a growing number of environmental problems are no longer confined to a certain region or country.

Even worse, a majority of people are reluctant to adopt the solutions the government has proposed. The major reason is that many people consider the environment problem as a future concern. Some environment problems, such as climate change,may need to be tackled even after a century. Time and money is better invested in coping with immediate problems such as house shortage and traffic jam than in preventing a disaster that is only expected to happen in the future.

In conclusion, workable as it seems , inducing people to defend their own local environment not only fails to be an effective solution but is difficult to make this goal a reality in real life and in addition to individual efforts, other measures are also necessary especially when the environment problems is caused by a combination of factors, many of which are too big for an individual to resolve.字数 336words

雅思写作真题7分范文:环境问题

雅思写作真题解析及审题

这个题目比较大的陷阱是后面有个形容词local,你不能说的很大,譬如说什么海洋污染、全球变暖、沙漠化,你要关注的是地区的环境问题,譬如说空气污染、垃圾、水源、树林破坏等。这个题目需要你对各种环境问题的差别和解决方法有比较好的理解。

然后,如果支持的话,要讨论保护当地环境的好处,而且最好要突出其必要性(为什么要个人去做,而不是政府做)。如果反对的话,可以说个人保护环境的坏处,或者是保护不了,因此要政府和企业去做,或者是直接说政府或者企业去负责的好处。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第10篇

Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages.

Do you agree or disagree?

The current hot issues include the one of weighing the advantages and disadvantages of the automobile. In my opinion, its advantages outstrip its disadvantages for two major reasons: impact on society and economic impact.

Firstly, the development of automobiles has had an enormous effect on people's way of life throughout the world. The automobile has given people freedom of movement. It influences where people live and work and how they spend their leisure time. However, each year, motor vehicle accidents kill an estimated 300,000 people throughout the world. But it is the drivers that are the chief factor in vehicle safety because they are responsible for about two-thirds of all accidents. Besides, the automobile itself has become safer and modern road building techniques have increasingly lowered the risk of automobile accidents.

Secondly, many nations depend on automobile production to provide jobs for millions of workers. Filling stations, restaurants, and other businesses that serve automobile travelers are of major importance to a country's economy. In addition, many developing nations have begun making automobiles to stimulate industry. For example, China has promoted broad-based automobile manufacturing. However, automobiles produce terrible air pollution that endangers people's health in many of the world's big cities. But in many countries, steps have been taken to control air pollution caused by automobiles.

In summary, the striking changes in people's lives and the economic impact created by the automobile in the early 20th century have since spread across much of the globe and its disadvantages are becoming insignificant.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第11篇

The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations reduce consumption of fossil fuels (gas and oil). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

国际社会必须立即采取行动,确保所有国家减少化石燃料(天然气和石油)的消费。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第12篇

Task 2

社会类

Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

范文解析

本题讨论的是,女性是否和男性拥有同样的权利去军队和国家警察等部门就职。题目类型是议论文的双边观点类题目,可以采用4段式作文结构。

注:题目说的是“同等权利”并非“同等职务/角色”,写作时要注意区分

文章结构

P1:引入话题+亮明观点;

P2:论证题目第二个观点(为什么女性不适合服务于军队);

P3:论证题目第一个观点(为什么女性也应有同样的权利服务于军队);

P4:总结全文:重申中心论点。

高分话题表达

performing law enforcement and defending the country 执法保卫国家

the recruitment of women 雇佣女性

are inferior to 不如…./ 弱于….

physical strength and endurance 体力与耐力

be flustered 慌乱

gender characteristics 性别特征

communication security 通讯安全

Air Force 空军

long-term scientific and systematical training 长期系统且科学的培训

fight on the battlefield 战场上肉搏厮杀

高分结构

Although some people think…. 让步状语从句

If a women's army fought with…. 虚拟语气

When facing an emergency, 非谓语动词做状语位于句首

because of 原因状语

sth discussed above 非谓语动词做定语

to judge whether….. 动宾就够的宾语从句

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第13篇

❖ done a fine job of 在某方面做得很好

❖ petrol-based consumption 以汽油为基础的消费

❖ align with 遵守

❖ Paris Agreement 《巴黎协定》是《联合国气候变化框架公约》(UNFCCC)框架内关于2020年起二氧化碳减排措施的协议。

❖ carbon neutrality 碳中和

❖ flourish 蓬勃发展v.

❖ sector 行业

❖ zero-carbon 零碳

❖ outlook 前景n.

❖ rosy 乐观的/有希望的

❖ draconian 严苛的/苛刻的

❖ backfire 起到反作用

❖ cobalt 钴

❖ vehicle batteries 汽车车载电池

❖ conundrum 令人迷惑的难题

❖ exploitation 剥削/压榨

❖ mining 采矿

❖ elevated radioactivity levels 高辐射量

❖ seeping into 渗透

❖ subterranean 地下的

❖ As such 正因为如此

❖ linger 流连/逗留

❖ carbon justice 碳正义

❖ pilgrimage 朝圣之旅

❖ decarbonization 去碳化

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第14篇

雅思写作 抽象话题解析

1. 竞争与合作哪个好?

题目:应当教育儿童竞争还是合作?竞争如何影响个人的,是利是弊?从团队运动比单独运动能学到更多的技能,同意与否?

2. 现在与未来哪个更重要?

母题:Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century? (050521, 090723)

提示:这道貌似抽象的话题其实可以化身为具体的话题,与我们之前准备过的环保、社会、犯罪类话题结合起来。比如新世纪我们会遇到环境污染、全球变暖、动物灭绝、资源短缺、人口过剩、犯罪率上升等多重问题。

子题:人们在哪些领域取得了进步,哪些领域仍需进步?为什么将来比现在更加重要?

3. 个人品质

题目:与生俱来的性格和生活中的经历哪个更主要?要不要回到一个没有贪婪与自私,而是尊重老人和传统的美好世界去?体育中的成功仅仅取决于体能吗,还是有心理因素?经济上的成就一定会带来幸福吗?老年人的观念是否有帮助?年轻人要不要遵守社会传统观念,还是自由成长?

4. 社会观念

题目:经济实力是衡量国家的成功的唯一因素吗?人们挑衣服的时候越来越讲究时尚,是好是坏?现在人们用东西用完就扔,为什么,会导致什么影响?(提示:原因部分是社会价值观,影响部分与环保类话题中“一次性的文化”联系)发展中国家的人要比发达国家更快乐,为什么?经济发展会导致社会价值的丢失吗?

雅思写作范文:快节奏社会的问题

Task:The speeding up of life in areas such as travel and communications is negatively affecting the society at every level --- individual, national, and global. Do you agree or disagree?

思路解析:

同意,快节奏的生活方式同时给个人,国家和全球带来的负面影响。

1. 个人层面:生活的加速会增大人们的压力,因为它破坏了生活的平衡。举例,飞机大大加速了人们的出行,但是也带来了更高的工作预期和更紧凑的时间计划。在太多例子中,企业员工被要求在早上乘坐飞机抵达另一个州,甚至是国家,来参加会议和谈判,然后又搭乘午夜的航班飞回家,中间没有任何的休息时间。结果是,人们会感觉筋疲力尽,喘不过气。

2. 国际层面:快速的运输和通讯系统的建立会进一步破坏环境。举例,飞机的频繁使用会排放大量的尾气。同样的,为了满足无线通讯的需求,如手机,数不清的基站被建立在山区和森林里,这破坏了生态圈。

3. 国家层面:便利的旅游和通讯会破坏一个国家的文化。举例,飞机增强了国家之间的联系,如贸易和旅游,但这也把国外文化引进到国内,这会导致文化竞争,并很有可能杀死本土文化。同样的,互联网的兴旺也把人们暴露在一个全球的流行文化之下,如流行音乐,电影,游戏,这让年轻人失去对于本国文化的兴趣。

参考范文:

Nowadays, modern technologies have sharply speeded up people’s traveling and communication. Some people argue that there are many negative results behind this fast-paced trend, personally, nationally, and globally. Personally, I strongly agree with this view, and my reasons will be explored as below.

Firstly, on the personal level, an accelerated life pace make individuals stressful, due to it breaks the balance between working and living. For example, airplanes, the fastest transportation nowadays, can largely shorten the time of people’s long-distant traveling, while its high efficiency also causes higher work expectancy and tighter work schedule. For example, in a single day, a manager of multi-national companies is asked to take plane to go for a meeting in another region and country far away in the morning, and fly back to the home at night. This fast and exhausting lifestyle not only damages people’s health, but also alienates them from families, because of the lack of time spent on exercise, rest, or dinners with spouse and children.

In addition, on the international level, fast systems of global transportation and communication worse the environment. For one thing, an increasing number of cross-border air flights mean more fossil oil is burned and more waste gas is emitted, such as smog. As a result, this kind of discharge further deteriorates the global warming. Similarly, for the purpose of building up a modern seamless communication system for cell phones and the Internet, new base stations are installed in mountains and forests, new cable ropes are buried under the seabed. These constructions make an overall destruction to the global ecosystem, thus leading to the extinction of species.

Finally, on the national level, the thriving of fast long-distant traveling and communication would destroy cultural identities of a country. For example, fast airplanes bring more foreigners to a region or a country for cross-border meetings and tours. In order to meet the needs and tastes of these new comers, local old buildings are replaced by modern skyscrapers, and traditional cuisines are replaced by western fast food like McDonald. What is more, advertisements and videos of a pop culture on the Internet, from Hollywood movies to rock music, from Paris fashions to online games, draw all attention of the public in any local area. In other words, under the influence of the Internet which plays a role of cultural invader, people will lose the interests and respects in their local culture.

In conclusion, adverse consequences of a fast-paced world are undeniable, including an unbalanced lifestyle, environmental problems caused by airplanes and telecommunication, and the disappearance of a local culture.

(435 words)

雅思写作范文:生活压力变大的原因

Task:It is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it?

思路解析:

1. 科技更新太快,这意味着人们不得不很努力地不停学习新的知识和技能。此外,激烈的就业竞争也让人们每天都处在紧张状态中。

2. 需要背负很多家庭责任,如照顾父母,照顾小孩。而生活成本却在不断增加,这让人们感受到经济上的压力。

3. 如何释放压力:多运动,运动能让人摆脱抑郁和沮丧,恢复精神上的放松。多跟人交流,这能获得来自他人的安慰,建议,和关爱,让人们看淡困难和焦虑。

参考范文:

The acceleration of industrialization and the prosperity of economy benefit our society a great deal. But with the speeding up of economic development, people are facing more and more pressure from various aspects of their life. This essay will explore the causes for the heavy pressure and put forward some feasible solutions.

One of the major causes is that people’s living rhythm has been promoted immensely with the upgrading of new-knowledge and hi-tech. To keep abreast with the society, people have to work intensively on the one hand and improve their knowledge on the other. The economic globalization strengthened international cooperation and expand people’s scope of activity. The fierce social competition deprives people of their spare time and makes their life more stressful.

Another factor comes from the pressure of people’s family. People in the current society have to shoulder the responsibility of family maintenance. On the one hand, people have to care for their parents, creating for them a happy and comfortable life. On the other hand, they have to give their children good education. To earn more money, people have to work very hard to finance their family.

If people live in heavy pressure, they will have problems both physically and psychologically. To relieve the pressure, I think the following suggestions are feasible and practical. Firstly, people are suggested to go in for some sports games in their spare time or at the weekend. Sports can build up people’s physique and make them vigorous. Secondly, people should communicate with others frequently and confess their trouble and difficulty to others, which is a very magic way to release one’s pressure. Finally, people have to find a balance between money and health. Otherwise, one’s health will be overdrawn and spoiled by money earning.

In brief, good life should not be obtained at the price of the deterioration of one’s health. People should improve their living pattern and lead a life of high quality.

(337 words)

雅思写作范文:长期离家工作的好坏

Task:Today some person have to work away from his family, what are the advantages and disadvantages?

思路解析:

离家工作的好处1:培养了独立性。举例,这些人不得不依赖和挖掘自己的潜力和能力来应付一切生活中的挑战和困难。

离家工作的好处2:培养了社交能力。举例,他们要面临一个完全陌生的社会,和不同肤色,生活习惯和宗教的人群打交道,这培养了跨文化理解力。

离家工作的坏处1:家庭关系会崩塌。这些离开的人无力照顾自己的亲人和孩子,让他们感觉到被抛弃。

离家工作的坏处2:精神压力过大。长时间离家的人总是饱受思乡病,孤独和焦虑的折磨。

参考范文:

Nowadays, working in a new place or a foreign country distant from homes has been a heated trend in debate. In my view, this change simultaneously brings benefits and risks to these people leaving home, and my reasons would be explored as below.

The main relevant benefits are the improvement of independence and interpersonal skills. Firstly, being away from the comfortable and safe zone built up by parents and friends in homeland, people in a strange environment, especially the youngsters, have to take responsibility for daily affairs, tasks, behaviors, health care and schedules. These efforts can improve their self-care skills and decision-making ability. Moreover, living in a different cultural circumstance, frequently inevitable interactions with local peers and residents who have different skin colors, social manners, lifestyles and religions serve as a catalyst for increased maturity. In other words, after encountering with cultural diversity, these outcomers would become more independent, flexible, patient and adaptable, and acquire proficient social skills as well. Lastly, for people who live and work abroad, they can stay a foreign language immersion for a long term, thus helping them to master how to speak a second language natively.

However, the demerits associated with this kind of emigration should never be ignored. For one thing, as many people, especially young adults, leave hometowns for far-away places, they leave family behind. As a result, extended family systems begin to disintegrate. The result is often a lack of childcare and eldercare for family members. When a younger person leaves, marriage prospects for young adults who decide to stay sill decline.

For another, the second demerit is about a challenge on the spiritual level. Being isolated from family and motherland, an immigrator tends to be troubled in the mental stress. Specifically, the homesick, loneliness, frustration caused by cultural conflicts, and fear about the future always surround these helpless people, and give them psychological suffering all the time.

In conclusion, it is very hard to decide that advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages, or the reverse is true. Although such experience is beneficial for the form of independent and social abilities, as well as mature mind, the absence from home is detrimental to the people and their families.

(367 words)

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第15篇

●从另一个社会类话题“贫富差距”入手。让步:财富增长分配到了富人手里,拉大贫富差距,居民幸福度下降;反驳:可以靠政策解决此矛盾,比如:加大富人税收

●take sth. for granted 认为…理所当然的

●diffuse v. 散布;扩散

3、As a matter fact, behind an addition in economic growth are more potential gains, if the money is distributed more to the ones who live on a tight budget. The most conspicuous one is that the disparity in terms of materialistic background between the rich and the poor can be narrowed down. It is not a rare case that people’s dissatisfaction and grumble is not ascribed to the unsatisfactory living conditions but the uneven distribution of resources. In other words, it is due to the economic gap that those who live in metropolises often shun those in rural areas, whom they view as impoverished and backwards-thinking, and the latter resent the former as arrogant and out of touch. In this sense, the economic addition to the poor can to some extent bridge the divide.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第16篇

雅思写作四类图表作文要点解析

一、雅思表格图图表作文的写作要点

1横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势

2不需要将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值

3最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的'

二、雅思曲线图图表作文的写作要点

1极点说明。即,对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明

2趋势说明。即,对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平

3交点说明。即,对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明

三、雅思饼状图图表雅思作文的写作要点

1介绍各扇面及总体的关系

2各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较

3重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的

四、雅思综合图图表作文的写作要点

1不求甚解,不拘泥于细节

2分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表

3不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系

以上就是这四类雅思图表作文的写作要点介绍,对于各个图表的特点和描写的重点的不同进行了对比,大家可以在备考自己的雅思图表作文考试的时候,提前进行适当的参考和借鉴。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第17篇

It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, are others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (剑桥雅思7test3)

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.

However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than to a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequent a child practices.

I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-wokring students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports star have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. With the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.

(个人类话题)范文九

Happiness is considered very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. (2016年4月真题)

Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships. Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give any definition that is true for everyone. however, if there are different kinds of happiness for different individuals then the first step in achieving it would be to have a degree of self-knowledge. A person needs to know who he or she is before being able to know what it is that makes him or her happy.

Of course, factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a living and a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. But this does not mean that people without these conditions cannot be happy.

Overall, I think an ability to keep clear perspectives in life is a more essential factor in achieving happiness. By that I mean an ability to have a clear sense of what is important in our lives (the welfare of our families, the quality of our relationships, making other people happy, etc.) and what is not ( a problem at work, getting annoyed about trivial things, etc.).

Life self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第18篇

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?(2017年12月真题)

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed, The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities.

However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travellers. For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced. Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long journeys.

In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient systems.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第19篇

20170708雅思大作文题目:

范文:

In my country, a century ago, it was not easy for a child to grow up due to malnutrition and diseases. But today, parents are able to not only guarantee children’s material abundance, but also provide them with qualified education. All these allow children to have more freedom enabling them to have better development.

Admittedly, it seems plausible to assert that children, given the young age, are not mature enough to enjoy much freedom. Obviously, children sometimes lack necessary experience and knowledge for them to make right decision or regulate their behaviors. Without any restriction, they may fail to resist the temptation and indulge themselves with freedom. For example, they are likely to spend all their pocket money on snacks, such as candies and puffed food, which is bad for health, or they waste too much time on watching TV and playing computer games, which squeeze up their time for other more meaningful activities.

However, with parents’ appropriate and effective supervision and guidance, children can benefit a lot from the freedom. It is parents’ responsibility to help children cultivate self-discipline and self-control and teach them how to judge right and wrong. All these are indispensable for children to enjoy freedom. Hence, they are free to explore the outside world and govern their life. The free access to Internet enables them to gain knowledge and make friends; the free choices of study and entertainment help them become independent and responsible. In a word, with the freedom, children are able to nurture many valuable traits and habits.

To sum up, it is beneficial for children today to have much freedom in life.

In many parts of the world, children have more freedom than they used to. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

儿童自由利:

1)自由的探索实践,获取更多知识技能

2)培养自身的独立和责任感

1)缺乏自控,做出错误选择

2)沉溺于游戏和电视

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第20篇

An ongoing topic of debate in traffic safety world has been whether the age for driving should be raised or not. Typically, the legal age to drive alone needs to be 17 or so, but there is a proposal, underpinned by some groups.

It is fairly hard to imagine that home has become the only place of safety in modern society, where residents are worried about various kinds of crimes, street robbery, car theft and even shooting. This is obligation of the government to protect the civil life and work, which, I think, could be classified into three aspects.

First, deterring potential crimes is considered as a direct way to improve living environment for residents. Some strict laws and regulations should be imposed on specific crime cases. For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment could be an effective way to deter crimes, like theft and robbery. Also, lowering the minimum crime age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crimes because younger criminals are liable to escape from punishments.

Second, the high rate of crimes is derived partly from the widening gap of living in cities. Therefore, creating more job opportunities after investing in manufactures and public services could, to some degree, bring about stable incomes. Reduction in the number of the homeless and unemployed contributes to decline in the level of social chaos and conflicts. When everyone is satisfied with the company they work for and the salary they are paid, there may be no need for them to risk committing crimes.

Third, popularity of primary and secondary education or opening more technical schools is an urgent task. People who live in slums with minimum education more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and comparatively higher social status. Therefore, the level of education reflects living condition and public security in communities, which for a long term is regarded as the foundation of civilized society.

In conclusion, there are plenty of solutions to crimes and social problems, which depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and individuals.

相关词汇

Street robbery街道抢劫

Car theft 偷车

Obligation责任

Classify分类

Deter震慑

Be imposed on强加于

Prolong延长

Imprisonment关_

Be liable to 易于做某事

Be derived from 由 而产生

Social chaos社会混乱

Conflict冲突

Slum贫民窟

Decent体面的

Comparatively相对而言地

雅思写作do you agree or disagree范文解读:社会责任犯罪题材

“是否同意”类文章是雅思写作大作文常见题型,平时注意积累词汇,短语对写作帮助非常大,以207月25日大作文真题为例,讲解如何写“社会责任”题材文章,希望对大家有帮助!

Task:

同题型文章回顾:年1月31日真题

示范写作大纲:

引导段:说明企业越来越多的社会现象,表明企业除了赚取利润还应承担社会责任的观点

主体段一:说明企业需要承担社会责任的第一个理由:很多家庭无法支付教育费用,无法获得教育就业的机会。

主体段二:说明企业需要承担社会责任的第二个理由:为社会贡献可以带来更多的企业利润。

主体段三:说明企业需要承担社会责任的弊端:影响企业运作和发展,严重可能会导致企业破产。

总结段:总结自己的观点。

示范写作:

语料:

vocabulary:bankruptcy welfare enterprise charity generation law-abiding citizen

Work/Life Balance

It is important to achieve a balance between work time and leisure or family time

Too much work can result in stress and poor health

“workaholics” may neglect their families and friends

People need to take regular holidays

Companies should be expect employees to work overtime

Nowadays, many people work part-time or have flexible working hours

Technology allow people to work from home

Many companies provide childcare facilities

A good work/ life balance can raise job satisfaction

Happy, healthy workers are more productive

雅思作文高分范文-青少年重罪犯是否应该判成年人的刑

雅思写作题目:Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思写作高分范文:关于年轻罪犯刑罚的话题及其解题思路

雅思写作范文:

Crimes can be detestable, while minor offenders and their crimes are from time to time treated with leniency. Thus, some argue that laws should not discriminate, and equally punish minor criminals—an opinion that this essay is against.

犯罪可以是可憎的,而未成年犯及其犯罪则往往是宽大处理。因此,有人认为法律不应该歧视和平等惩罚未成年罪犯这篇文章反对的观点。

To begin with, minors are yet to approach their maturity, and their crimes, albeit serious, should be punished with the consideration of their young age. Internationally speaking, countries might define the start of adulthood differently—18 being the most common—but they commonly believe that there is adistinction between minor crimes and adult crimes. Minors are likely to be given a better chance for rehabilitation when they commit crimes because of their inexperience of life and possibly better life prospects. In that case, milder punishments are inflicted on juvenile delinquents: lesser sentencing and relatively less harsh correction facilities are introduced in their cases.

首先,未成年人尚未成熟,他们的罪行,虽然严重,应该考虑到他们的年轻。从国际上讲,各国对成年期开始的定义可能有所不同,18是最常见的,但它们通常认为轻微犯罪和成年犯罪之间有区别。未成年人在犯罪时,由于缺乏生活经验,可能还有更好的生活前景,他们可能得到更好的康复机会。在那种情况下,对青少年罪犯的惩罚比较轻:在他们的案件中引入较少的量刑和相对较不严厉的矫正设施。

Moreover, considering the correction process, minor offenders should not be punished equally as adult criminals. Despite the above-mentioned arguments that are in young offenders’ defense, crimes, especially felonies by minors, deserve heavy punishment to deter crimes and reduce the harm of those crimes to the society. However, sending minors to adult prison might entail unexpectedly negative results. First, minors are naturally closer to more sophisticated criminals and crimes, which aggravate juvenile delinquency. Second, when in adult correctional facilities, young criminals might be threatened by assaults by adult prisoners, mostly sexually, which is nowhere closer to the purpose of rehabilitation.

此外,考虑到矫正程序,未成年犯不应受到成年罪犯的同等惩罚。尽管有上述论点在青少年犯罪者的辩护中,但犯罪,特别是未成年人的重罪,应该受到严厉的惩罚,以阻止犯罪,减少这些犯罪对社会的伤害。然而,将未成年人送入成人_可能会带来意想不到的负面结果。首先,未成年人更接近更复杂的犯罪和犯罪,这加重了青少年犯罪。第二,在成人教养机构中,年轻罪犯可能受到成年犯人的攻击,主要是性侵犯,这与康复目的相去甚远。

In sum, law breakers, be they minors or not, should be punished for their wrongdoings, but lesser sentences and special correctional facilities might be more reasonable and helpful.

总之,无论违法者是否是未成年人,都应该因他们的过错受到惩罚,但是更轻的刑罚和特殊的惩戒设施可能更合理,更有帮助。

雅思犯罪类作文思路解析

首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些,主要有分析犯罪的原因,青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。话题题目如下:

The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, some believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?

In many countries crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?

下面我们就一一分析一下。

首先:关于犯罪的成因。

无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪,首先应该想到的是经济问题,经济问题会影响社会的稳定,如失业率的提升,失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产,这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题,也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。

由经济层面进入教育层面,大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低,他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会,或者失业导致流落街头,这类人群冲动易怒,易发生冲突。

心理健康问题,这是比较容易忽略的问题。校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题,甚至场景是校园暴力,家庭暴力的受害者。

这里有一些特殊的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他原因,要单独说。由于信息技术发达,个人信息安全遭到窃取,给网络诈骗可乘之机。还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。高科技犯罪者本身的受教育程度可能很高,智商也高,这时候我们要转换思路,这类高科技犯罪背后的原因是法律意识淡薄。

犯罪情节由轻到重包括:校园暴力、盗窃、杀人,经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见,建议考生多关注相关报道,新闻中会给出相关的事件分析。

分析完成因,后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪,按照情节的严重程度做不同的处理。

情节轻微的,小惩小戒,情节严重者就要毫不留情的处罚,甚至拘禁。

面对青少年犯罪,对于情节较轻的一般采取纠正引导。情节严重的如盗窃、伤人,那么就需要采取一定处罚措施,情节严重到伤人的,则应该依法采取措施。有严重暴力倾向,_的行为的青少年,建议采取心理治理和法律约束。同时对被害人也需要进行心理治疗。

然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上减少或降低犯罪伤害的有效措施。来自学校,管教所和家庭的教育很重要。最后,为了避免再次误入歧途,视情况为青少年罪犯提供必要的帮助和就业指导等。

最后,如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪,当然是提高就业率和加强国家的安全意识。

关于反复犯罪,并不能完全依靠_解决,_能关住的只有严重暴力倾向的罪犯,而大部分初犯者,他们的人生还很长,需要社会的重新接纳。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第21篇

小作文题目是:The chart below shows the average time 16-22-year olds spent on playing video games in four different countries between 1992 and .Summarize the details. Select and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

范文解析 该柱状图难度中等偏下,数字相对较少,共有8个数字。让我们先来看一下3w(when, where, what)。When是过去的两个年份1992和2002,切记用过去时态。Where为四个国家,what为16-22岁的年轻人花费在视频游戏上的时间。可以看出when和where两个变量,要求我们描述这十年间的变化趋势和国家之间的静态对比。所以考生可以按照时间为主线去分段,也可以按照国家去分段。

雅思小作文真题范文:

The bar chart compares the amount of time spent on video games on average by youngsters aged between 16-22 years old from four countries in two years 1992 and 2002.

该柱状图对比了1992年至期间,来自四个国家、年龄在16岁至22岁之间的青少年平均花在电子游戏上的时间。

It is evident that in 1992, the largest amount of time (85 hours) allocated to video games was from young people in country B. This was narrowly followed by country C and country A where respectively 78 hours and 76 hours were spent while it took the minimal hours for this age group to play video games in country D, standing at merely 50.

很明显,在1992年,最大的时间(85小时)分配给视频游戏是年轻人的国家。这是勉强跟着C和国家在哪里分别花了78小时和76小时而花了最少的时间这个年龄段在国家D玩视频游戏,站在仅仅50。

These youngsters increasingly relied on video games to relax themselves as there was an overall upward trend in total time ten years later. A two-hour rise could be noticed in both country A and country B, with the latter one still ranking the top. Despite of a considerable increase by 8 hours, video games still attracted the least attention of young people in country D and it is country C that was the only one which witnessed a slight drop by 1 hour.

这些年轻人越来越依赖电子游戏来放松自己,因为后总时间出现了总体上升趋势。在A国和B国都可以看到两小时的增长,而B国仍然排在首位。尽管电子游戏增加了8个小时,但在D国,电子游戏仍然是最不受年轻人关注的。C国是唯一一个出现1小时轻微下降的国家。

In summary, in three of the four countries, teenagers and younger adults tended to devote more time playing video games over the decade.

总之,在这四个国家中,有三个国家的青少年和年轻人在过去十年中倾向于花更多的时间玩电子游戏。

雅思写作话题之团队精神 范文及思路解析

首先我们来看写作题目:Team or group activities can teach more important skills for life than those done alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?(2018年9月雅思写作真题)

雅思写作话题解析:团队活动对于个人来说可以学到更多技能,对于这个观点你同意还是不同意呢?首先大作文是议论文,讨论的核心点在于,和个人活动来看,团队活动带来更多的个人成长,所以,考生在进行论述时,除了强调团体活动,还要注意个人活动对于个人成长的影响。

雅思写作话题范文结构

首段:话题引入并亮明自己观点;

第二段:强调团队活动的意义:可以让人们学到重要技能,让人们发展合作和社交技能;

第三段:说明个人活动同样具有培养个人技能的意义:思辨能力;

第四段:总结全文:重申中心论点。

雅思写作话题范文及思路解析

In this highly competitive world, acquiring a variety of skills has become far more important than ever before.

首段陈述事实:强调学习技能的重要性,人与人之间的竞争是激烈的,不断学习各种技能

才能提高个人的实力。

It is argued that people gain more necessary abilities through participating in a variety of group work, compared with the individual one.

和单枪匹马行动相比,从团队活动中确实能学到很多技能。

From my perspective, skills gained from both types of activities are equally essential.

亮明观点:学习技能不仅要从团队活动中获得,个人行动中也需要去学习。

第二段分别讨论团队合作和个人活动中如何进行技能学习。

what people are able to learn by teamwork is meaningful.

Firstly, by cooperating and working together with other participators, people are able to gain a better understanding of how to collaborate with others, an important quality that can facilitate to achieve career success. 分论点1:团队合作的意义:促进人与人之间的相互理解及沟通能力的培养,这是促进团队合作成功的重要品质。

Another essential ability people can develop from group activities is communication skill. Whatever the group work is, playing football, basketball or doing a scientific research, it requires participants to communicate and socialize with others from diverse backgrounds especially when they hold different perspectives. 举例子:踢足球、科研都需要相互配合,需要沟通,当然团队合作中会有不同的观点,如何取平衡吸收这些观点呢?

People with strong social skills can adapt to a new environment more quickly and are more likely to access good resources from their friends wherever they are.

分论点2:对于那些社交能力强的人来说,能够迅速融入新环境,也就意味着能带来更多的人脉资源。

第四段,个人活动的意义

Nevertheless, the importance of individual activities is not supposed to be neglected and performing a task separately contributes extraordinarily to cultivating people’s critical and independent thinking. :个人活动的重要性同样不能忽视。个人行动培养的是人的独立思考能力和批判精神。

Individuals, when completing a mission or project alone, have no one to turn to but are forced to work out the most appropriate method to address the difficulty they are faced with. A person who plays chess game on the computer, for example, needs to consider carefully the merits and demerits of each step so as to win finally even when being at a disadvantage. 在没有人从旁协助下,如何通过自己的努力解决困难,也是一种能力的培养。举例:下棋。

It can help people better deal with their adult life for the thinking ability is one of the most indispensible qualities to deal with various challenges encountered in both workplace and daily life.

大部分时候个人都是独自面对生活中很多的挑战,所以,在个人活动中学习到的技能并不少。

第五段:总结。总之,为了能够促进人的全面发展,团队活动和个人行动一个都不能少。

In conclusion, both working as a number in a team and completing a task individually are advantageous since only in this way can they grow into well-rounded individuals who have a wide range of interests and skills.

2018年11月10日雅思写作真题及高分范文之:职场能力

原题是:Many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in the job?

雅思写作真题范文:

Regarding how social skills and qualifications contribute to a person's success in the career, I think both factors are equally important.

关于社会技能和资格如何有助于一个人在事业上的成功,我认为这两个因素同样重要。

Academic qualifications cannot be acquired without many years of study and continued practice, so they reflect a person's academic background and mastery of specialized knowledge and skills. Many employers require job applicants to possess a certain level of qualification, which is an important criterion to evaluate whether the applicant is qualified for the position or not. Therefore, a high-level academic qualification obtained in a renowned university can bring a person more opportunities in the/job market and a good starting point in his or her path towards career success. In addition to this, people have also become increasingly aware of the importance of social skills in the workplace. Those with sophisticated social skills can develop and maintain good relationships with colleagues. With mutual support and active interaction, employees tend to have higher efficiency and enjoy their working lives. This is particularly important in today's society, where employees often face complicated tasks that require close cooperation among different departments. Also, good social skills enable/people to establish wide connections at work and in life, directly associated with their performance in some occupations. For example, a sociable salesman, even though he may not possess very high qualification, can sign more contracts than those who are not good at Socializing with others.

没有多年的学习和不断的实践,学历是无法获得的,所以它反映了一个人的学术背景和对专业知识和技能的掌握。很多雇主都要求求职者具备一定的资历,这是衡量应聘者是否胜任该职位的一个重要标准。因此,在一所著名大学获得的高水平的学术资格可以给一个人带来更多的就业机会和一个良好的起点在他或她的职业成功的道路上。此外,人们也越来越意识到社交技能在工作场所的重要性。那些拥有复杂社交技能的人能够与同事建立并保持良好的关系。通过相互的支持和积极的互动,员工往往会有更高的效率,享受他们的工作生活。这在当今社会尤为重要,因为在当今社会,员工往往面临复杂的任务,需要不同部门之间的密切合作。此外,良好的社会技能使人们在工作和生活中建立广泛的联系,与他们在某些职业中的表现直接相关。例如,一个善于交际的推销员,尽管他可能没有很高的资格,但他能比那些不善于交际的人签更多的合同。

Overall, there is no doubt that good academic qualifications are important in job-hunting and personal development. However, since communicating and cooperating with others have become an essential part in the workplace, social skills should also be highly valued.

总的来说,良好的学历在求职和个人发展中是很重要的。然而,由于与他人交流和合作已经成为工作中必不可少的一部分,社交技能也应该得到高度重视。

2018年11月10日雅思大作文真题范文:社交能力重要吗

雅思大作文写作真题:Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good you agree or disagree social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in their jobs?

雅思大作文范文解析

本题针对讨论在职场中,social skills和 academic qualifications的重要性。题目较为简单,但是注意,如果观点给出的是一个“比较”关系,文中要出现一个针对性质的反驳

雅思大作文结构

P1:引入话题+给出自己的答案(反对这个观点并且提出自己的观点);

P2:学历的重要性——主要作用

P3:社会技能的重要性——辅助作用

P4:总结全文:重申中心论点。

雅思高分话题表达

equal importance 相等的重要性

main prerequisite 主要的先决条件

knowledge-intensive world.知识密集型社会

eligibility 合格

a normal college 师范类大学

interior designers 室内设计师

alma mater 母校

academic institutions. 学术机构

雅思大作文范文

Some companies attach equal importance to both social skills and academic qualifications when hiring new employees. In my opinion, education is the main prerequisite for achieving a successful career in this knowledge-intensive world.

一些公司在招聘新员工时,同样重视社会技能和学历。在我看来,教育是在这个知识密集型的世界中获得成功的主要先决条件。

First, higher education provides the basis for accessing top companies. It is not difficult to understand that job seekers must spend considerable amounts of time, money and energy to obtain their professional qualifications. This is why most employers value academic qualifications, as such eligibility means applicants have mastered more precise and professional knowledge. Without this competence, no chance could be acquired to enter the interview level. Second, after they are employed, expertise obtained from alma mater can make them work more efficient. For example, once a candidate from a normal college becomes a teacher, solid foundations like teaching methods and educational psychology helps him easily adapt into the workplace.

首先,高等教育为进入顶级公司提供了基础。不难理解,求职者必须花费大量的时间、金钱和精力来获得他们的专业资格。这就是大多数雇主看重学历的原因,因为这种资格意味着申请者掌握了更精确和专业的知识。没有这种能力,就没有机会进入面试阶段。其次,在他们被聘用后,从母校获得的专业知识可以让他们工作更有效率。例如,一旦一个师范院校的考生成为一名教师,扎实的教学方法和教育心理学等基础可以帮助他很容易地适应工作环境。

Nonetheless, I also have to insist that social skills do play a very important role to support one’s career success. For example, some interior designers with great interpersonal skills can accurately figure out what their customers like in their future home, including stylistic preferences, color matching and decorations. Furthermore, such tendency can hardly be learned through attending academic institutions. In addition, team spirit is indispensable during one’s career. Due to globalization, many successful cases are achieved because of cooperation. Hence, better social skills add positive opportunities and great possibilities for most individuals’ success.

尽管如此,我也不得不强调,社交技能的确对一个人的职业成功起着非常重要的作用。例如,一些具有良好人际交往能力的室内设计师能够准确地判断出顾客对未来家居的喜好,包括风格偏好、色彩搭配和装饰。此外,这种倾向很难通过学术机构学习。此外,团队精神是一个人的职业生涯中不可缺少的。由于全球化,许多成功的案例都是由于合作。因此,更好的社交技能为大多数人的成功增加了积极的机会和巨大的可能性。

In conclusion, academic qualifications and social skills are essential for a bright career. However, in terms of importance, the former is more vital than the latter considering the competitiveness in the labor force.

综上所述,学历和社会技能对于一个光明的职业是必不可少的。然而,就重要性而言,前者比后者更重要,考虑到劳动力的竞争力。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第22篇

雅思写作话题词汇和话题解析:关于社团活动的讨论

雅思写作话题题目:Full-time university students spend much of their time on study. Some people think that it is essential for them to take some other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (大学生花太多的时间在学习上,有些人认为大学生应该多参加其他的课外活动,你同意还是不同意?)

【关键词分析】

这道真题的关键词考生应该落脚在other activities,这个关键词范围很广意味考生可以借鉴相关的话题进行分析,例如社团活动,兼职,义工,运动等都可以叫做其他活动。考生可以通过替换熟悉的爱好进行讲解。此外,因为范围广,所以考生需要注意若想得高分,需要构造一个新颖的话题,不能过于陈旧,例如打篮球之类的。

【结构与思路】

该类真题属于教育类,题型也是常见的是否同意的观点,今年出现的频率也是很高的,建议考生采取双边支持的态度,赞同上述题目中的观点。在小站君看来,考生可以采取五段式的写法进行观点的论述。考生需要花两段去说明参加社团活动的重要性,一般可以归纳为三点:第一,扩展和学习不是从课本里出来的见识,加强综合能力;第二是发展人际关系,有利于社会圈的构建。第三,可以把课本的知识应用在实际生活中去。然后,考生需要花两段承认学习的重要性,因为学习是大学的主要目的,学习不仅仅只是课本上的内容,还可以收获更多新的观点。最后强调一下这两者都很重要,然后要找到最合适的平衡,不能过多倾向任何一方。

【雅思写作话题词汇】

Academic achievement 学业成就

Out-of-the-classroom activities走出课堂活动

Well-rounded individual 个人的全面发展

Provide could positively impact students' emotional development 提供学生情商的发展

Negotiate, manage conflict and cooperate with fellow students协商、管理冲突、与同学合作

Extracurricular involvement课外参与

Abilities, talents and career goals能力、人才和职业目标

Advance academically and to mature socially 有利于学术化和社会化

To volunteer service-related projects志愿服务相关项目

雅思写作高频词汇和话题解析:关于独居生活的讨论

雅思写作话题题目:As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in a small family unit. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life? (在发达国家中,很多人选择独居或者小家庭,什么原因,对社会和家庭有什么影响?)

【关键词分析】

很多考生对于live individually or in a small family unit非常陌生,单纯理解为家庭成员很少,然后一起生活之类的意思。其实是翻译为不结婚,和不要小孩子的家庭。可以很清楚的知道是讨论独居生活,和不要小孩子家庭的原因和影响。这两者有不同和相同之处,考生一定要清晰的表明这两种的区别,同时要强调两者的共同点,然后对这个共同点进行陈述影响。在小站君看来,这两种形式可以理解为对个人自由度的讨论,也可以上升为对生活的不同追求和传统观点的反叛之类的。

【结构与思路】

此类考题属于社会类的,需要分析原因和影响,难度较大。因为需要考生知道相关客观原因和影响。因此考生可以分为四段进行叙述。中间两段分别阐明一下原因和影响。通常,原因可以分为三类:第一是城市生活压力大,流动性特别高,导致孩子会成为负担。第二是物价不断上涨,导致生活成本加大,没有足够经济能力养育孩子。第三就是工作时间长,平时加班等因素,没有太多时间照顾孩子。影响可以分为三类:第一可以说会造成老龄化,社会劳动力断层,加重政府开支,以及医疗费用上升。第二是幸福感会下降,孤独会造成心理疾病例如抑郁症之类的。第三就是传统的家庭文化会丢失,无法继承家庭文化带来的社会和谐。最后在结尾处,考生只需要在简单说明一下自己的观点,然后希望有关部分出台相关政策等,帮助这个现象的改善等。

【雅思写作话题词汇】

Live alone in a metropolis 大城市独居生活

Modern urbanized lifestyle 现代生活方式

Circumstance, committing to a serious relationship or starting a family 境遇,承诺,组建新家庭

Low birthrates 出生率低

Result in an ageing population 导致老龄化

Medical care service 医疗保障

Individual’s general satisfaction 个人满意度

Increase the sense of isolation 孤独感增强

雅思写作解析:关于语言发展趋势的话题

雅思写作解析题目:In the world, only a few languages are increasing in use,while many others are declining. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? (如今这个社会,仅仅只有一部分语言正在增长使用,但其他的语言在退后,你认为这个是积极的还是消极的发展。)

【关键词分析】

这道题的关键词要落脚于languages,考生除了需要知道各个国家的语言单词之外,更重要清楚很多民族也有其特定的语言。除了大家常规知道的英语,德语,意大利语之外,更应该强调一些地区民族语言正在消亡。考生如果要在此类话题取得高分的话,要多多强调国内少数民族语言文化的发展,例如客家话的消失,也可以说粤语地区采用普通话教学的利与弊等。这样才能更加丰富上述话题的延展性。

【结构与思路】

考生可以通过上述关键词知道大概话题的朝向,注意在此类话题需要表明明确的观点,最好不要持有中立的观点。此外,该文章属于典型的议论题,建议分为四段段展开。首尾为介绍背景和总结大意,第二段说明语言丰富性的好处,第三段写语言消失的形式,以及造成的后果等。考生可以参考下述材料。

第一段考生可以简单说明一下世界各地区的语言状况,然后分析一下原因,最好还要介绍一下国内的语言情况,写此类话题文章最好细化到身边的例子,更有说服力。第二段介绍语言多样化的好处,可以追溯各地区文化发展的源头,更好的理解古代文明,以及各种文明相互交流的证据。要明确语言是文化的载体,语言的消失也印证文化的消亡等观点。还可以介绍一些解决的方法,例如成立相关保护基金,鼓励不同语言教学形式等。第三段考生可以介绍单一语言发展会让各地区特色文化消亡,导致文化归属感下降,各地区民族失去向心力。同时还要介绍一下风俗习惯因为语言消失而消失,例如道家文化的字符无人在会写,也许上面以后会出现的是英文,用假设的例子震撼考官。最后一段考生总结上述论点,然后建议各地政府要加强文化语言保护等。

雅思写作复习经验关于网购话题的解析和范文

雅思写作题目:In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?

雅思写作题目讲解:

首段 : 背景描述 + 论点 转述(正向 / 反向 ) + 自己的观点

第二段 :支持/反对的观点 论点 +理由

第三段 :支持/反对的观点 论点+ 例证

第四段: 让步段 “让步+转折句”即观点的合理性,+对此观点的反驳

第五段: 总结全文 +强调观点 +得出结论(提倡的解决措施)

雅思写作范文:

Science and technology developing rapidly, especially for the Internet popularizing, gives rise to various considerable changing and advantages , in terms of online shopping , relative money logger applying widely and enhancing the effectiveness of the work greatly, etc .However, the potentially detrimental impact from Internet can not be ignored, which is conspicuously embodies in the alienation between individuals and the deficiency of skills of effective communication .After the thoughtful and serious consideration , I prefer to harbor the above perspective that the Internet has its own demerits and localization more .

科学技术的迅猛发展,特别是互联网的普及,使网上购物、相对理财工具的广泛应用以及工作效率的大幅度提高等方面产生了各种可观的变化和优势。互联网的三重影响不容忽视,这突出地体现在个人之间的疏离和有效沟通技巧的缺乏上。经过深思熟虑和认真考虑,我倾向于持有互联网有自己的观点。缺点和定位更多。

To begin with, emotional alienation between individuals has been the irreversible tendency of the current society. Namely, an increasingly prevalent number of individuals in current society consider the Internet as the indispensable part of life to devote more time and energy into entertaining on it, unavoidably, to exacerbate the preference and awareness of everyone living in the self-centered world without too much considering the relation and emotion with others.

首先,人与人之间的情感异化一直是当今社会不可逆转的趋势。也就是说,在当今社会中,越来越多的人认为互联网是生活中不可缺少的一部分,为了花费更多的时间和精力在互联网上娱乐,不可避免地会加剧生活在以自我为中心的世界中的每个人的偏好和意识。多考虑与他人的关系和情感。

Besides, the Internet disseminating and applying widely exerts the devastating impact on the social skills of individuals .For example, Individuals can tackle almost various issues and troubles in daily routine by using the Internet, inevitably, resulting in lacking of face-to-face verbal communication and coordination with others, even to lose the skills of coping with the practical issues in daily life in private with clear trait of thought and effective approach.

此外,互联网的广泛传播和应用对个人的社会技能产生了破坏性的影响。例如,个人在日常工作中,不可避免地会利用互联网解决各种各样的问题和麻烦,导致缺乏面对面的语言交流。与他人交往和协调,甚至丧失了处理日常生活中实际问题的能力,具有清晰的思维品质和有效的途径。

There is no denying that the Internet not only brings about the convenient and fast, but provides the unprecedented platform to communicate with individuals without going outside, however, from another point of view, remaining within doors to communicate tend to exacerbate the emotional alienation between individuals further and emerge with the loss of skills of adapting to society and dealing with specific issue that confused them in daily life.

毋庸置疑,互联网不仅带来了方便快捷,而且为个人提供了前所未有的交流平台,而不走出门外,然而,从另一个角度来看,留在门内交流往往加剧了情感的疏离。在个人之间,随着适应社会和处理日常生活中使他们困惑的特定问题的技能的丧失而进一步浮现。

On balance, based on the above analyzing and thought ,conspicuously , I firmly harbor the perspective that Internet has the compelling obligation to cause the alienation between individuals and certain loss of social skills due to its insuperable limitation .Only when we face up with pessimistic consequence triggered by Internet and take the effective and efficient way can we probably change the deteriorating social phenomenon .

综上所述,基于以上的分析和思考,显然,我坚定地认为,互联网具有强制性的义务来造成个人之间的疏离,以及由于它无法克服的局限性而造成的某些社会技能的损失。互联网引发的系列事件,采取有效而有效的途径,可能改变日益恶化的社会现象。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第23篇

You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live.

What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why?

Model Answer:

I think the question what would I do if I had a chance to improve my community is difficult. I have in my mind many things, the improvement of which will make our community better place to live but they all require the participation of many people and, moreover, they require investments, which I can not provide. For example, my community is quite noisy. We have the huge mall just in front of our community, so traffic jams are very common for this place. I think that the construction of a few pass-by roads will benefit all people who live here as well as people who drive by every day.

Unfortunately, the question is what I can do for my community giving a few hours of my time every month. I think I can not do much, but I still can help someone in my community. For example, I can baby-sit. I know a couple of families with little children, who can not afford to spend much money on the baby-sitter. One of these families is a single mom with a little girl. Julia, this is her name, is a waitress in a restaurant. She is a great person and we became close friends. So, sometimes I offer her help with her child when she has to work in the evenings. Another family has two funny little twins. One time their parents asked me to babysit their children because they had to attend an unexpected presentation.

I think this kind of help brings many benefits to my community. First of all, people become friendlier. For example, those families, which I mentioned above, became friends after I introduced them to each other. Second of all, people get to know each other and feel more secure in their houses and apartments. Finally, I am ready to help those people because I am sure that they will help me too. One time I lost the keys from my car and Julia offered me her car for a while.

To sum up, I believe that baby-sitting is a great way to help my community in many aspects.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第24篇

Environmental problems should be solved by the government instead of individuals and private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2013年2月真题)

Environmental protection is no doubt a major issue confronting the modern society with the development of new technologies and the explosion of world population. While the issue is certainly relevant to each individual citizen and all the companies, some people contend that only the government should be concerned about protecting the environment. I concede that the government should lead the efforts in addressing the environmental problems. Nevertheless, cooperation and participation from the corporations and individual citizens are essential as well.

There is no doubt that the government is the agency that should play the leading roles in solving the environmental problems. To begin with, with the power to collect taxes from individual citizens and private companies, the government have the financial resources that are necessary to deal with environmental issues. In addition, the government may formulate policies to provide incentives for the companies and individuals to reduce the amount of pollution caused by their activities. Finally, the government is the only institution that may enact laws related to environmental problems.

On the other hand, without the cooperation and participation of individual citizens and private companies, the government's efforts to protect the environment would not be effective. For example, the government may launch a campaign to educate the public about the desirability of driving compact cars for reducing the air pollution. The campaign would make little difference if the individuals pay little attention to the information or do not care about the environment at all. Nor would the government's goal be achieved if the car manufacturers do not produce more compact cars for the market. In other words, the government alone cannot solve the problem of environment. It takes the collaborative efforts from individual and corporate citizens to improve the situation.

In conclusion, I agree that the government should take the responsibility to lead the society in addressing the problems of environmental pollution as it has the power and resources necessary to do so. Nonetheless, individual citizens and private companies have to be engaged if the government is to accomplish anything.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第25篇

This table gives detailed information about the conditions of health care in three nations in terms of three aspects from 1982 to .

本表从1982年至三个国家的卫生保健状况的三个方面提供了详细资料。

In terms of the number of doctors per thousand, figure for Sweden was slightly higher, 2 and 1 more than that of Austria and France, at 20 in 1982. In the next 18 years, the amount of surgeons increased more significantly in Austria, reaching 32 per thousand while rises could also be seen in other two nations with 31 and 30 respectively.

就每千名医生的人数而言,瑞典的数字略高,比奥地利和法国的数字多2和1,1982年为20。在接下来的里,奥地利的外科医生数量显著增加,达到每千人32人,而其他两个国家的外科医生数量也在增加,分别为31人和30人。

As for average beds in each hospital, the numbers in Austria experienced a moderate decline, from 20 to 16 per thousand, while the figure for Sweden almost halved to 12. In contrast, hospital beds climbed marginally in France by 4 per 1000 in given period.

就每家医院的平均床位而言,奥地利的数字略有下降,从每千人20张降至16张,而瑞典的数字几乎减半,降至12张。相比之下,法国的医院病床在一定时期内每1000个床位中略微增加了4个。

Turning to length of stay (LOS) in hospital per person, all nations had a fall in this respect, especially in Sweden (14 to 6 days). At the same time, LOS for Austria and France decreased to 9 and 8 days severally.

关于人均住院时间(LOS),所有国家在这方面都有所下降,特别是瑞典(14至6天)。同时,奥地利和法国的损失分别减少到9天和8天。

Overall, judging from the data given, it is clear to see that the medical care systems in Austria, Sweden and France made huge progress in last 20 years.

总的来说,从给出的数据来看,很明显,奥地利、瑞典和法国的医疗保健系统在过去的里取得了巨大的进步。

范文原创自小站老师Jeff. Lei

1月26日雅思大作文真题范文 女性去军队和警察等部门工作的权利

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第26篇

Success, an expected good result that a person may reach, is dedicated by various qualities including personal characters, knowledge accumulation, and cooperative spirit. That universities or colleges could educate such qualities for a person to succeed is a too narrow belief.

成功,一个人所能达到的预期的好结果,是由个人品格、知识积累和合作精神等多方面的品质所决定的。大学或学院能够为一个人的成功培养这样的品质是一个太狭隘的信念。

To begin with, individual personalities and characters are the initial keys to potential achievements, as the road to success is full of thorns, requiring the person to be prepared for optimism, calmness, and perseverance to strike the hedge and step forward to the established goals. These characters, in fact, are formed based on the influences from families, schools, and wider societies during the self-development process, which cannot be learnt at once or in any single place.

首先,个人的个性和性格是潜在成就的最初关键,因为通往成功的道路充满荆棘,需要一个人准备好乐观,冷静,和毅力去跨越障碍,朝着既定的目标前进。事实上,这些性格是在自我发展的过程中受到家庭、学校和更广泛的社会的影响而形成的,而这些影响是不可能在任何一个地方都能同时学会的。

The second key is knowledge base. Knowledge is widely regarded as one of the most powerful competences for a person to make a difference, but knowledge and information storage is built and developed in accumulation, starting from antenatal training, then to babbling, and moving on to receiving basic educations at primary and secondary schools. In other words, learning knowledge needs a solid foundation. Without the paved footstone, university and academic study would be as unrealistic as a castle in the air.

第二个关键是知识库。知识被广泛认为是一个人做出改变的最强大的能力之一,但知识和信息存储是在积累中建立和发展起来的,从产前培训开始,到咿呀学语,再到小学和中学接受基础教育。换句话说,学习知识需要一个坚实的基础。没有铺好的基石,大学和学术研究就像空中楼阁一样不切实际。

Further, the sense of being collaborative plays an indispensable role. Only when an individual learns and knows how to effectively interacts and coordinates with others at growth can he or she acquire parents’ support, teachers’ guidance, and friends’ coordination---the important sources to help the person to become successful. Thus, it would be too late if a person starts learning such quality at university.

此外,合作意识也扮演着不可或缺的角色。只有当一个人学会并知道如何在成长过程中有效地与他人互动和协调,他或她才能获得父母的支持,老师的指导,朋友的协调——这些都是帮助一个人成功的重要来源。因此,如果一个人在大学里开始学习这样的素质就太晚了。

University education is the final stage of formal learning after secondary schoolings. This means, university is the place where students could further enhance and strengthen the key qualities, regardless of personal characters, knowledge system, or cooperative consciousness via more professional and well-focused instructions and assignments; rather a kindergarten for nurturing baby learners.

大学教育是中学毕业后正式学习的最后阶段。这意味着,大学是学生通过更专业、更集中的指导和作业,无论个人性格、知识体系或合作意识如何,都能进一步提高和加强关键素质的地方;更像是一个培养婴儿学习者的幼儿园。

月17日雅思写作真题及高分范文之:成功人士品质的大学习得

年11月17日场的雅思写作考试已经结束,为大家带来本期雅思大作文话题之社交能力在职场中重要吗?原题是:The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic what extent do you agree or disagree? ?请看本期范文

雅思写作真题范文:

The purpose of higher education has been a topic of debate for some claim that there are many successful people without a college degree, I believe education can have an overall impact on one's life.

高等教育的目的几十年来一直是争论的话题。虽然有人说有很多没有大学学位的成功人士,但我相信教育可以对一个人的生活产生全面的影响。

Completing increasingly advanced levels of education shows that a persor has a drive and commitment to learn and apply information, ideas and theo ries to achieve a variety of tasks and goals. Many employers require col ege-level education, even for roles which previously did not require it, such as administrative assistant positions. It is true that the fewer years of educa tion one has completed, the fewer doors are open to him. Educational re quirements are quick and easy way to narrow down the field of in situations where there are more applicants than jobs. Wher hiring from a field of candidates, employers prefer whose who have com pleted the higher level of education.

完成日益提高的教育水平表明一个人有一种学习和应用信息、想法和想法来完成各种任务和目标的动力和决心。许多雇主要求大学本科水平的教育,即使是以前不要求的职位,比如行政助理职位。的确,一个人受教育的年数越少,为他打开的门就越少。教育方面的要求是缩小申请者范围的捷径,尤其是在申请者多于工作的情况下。无论从哪个领域招聘,雇主都更喜欢那些受过高等教育的人。

More importantly, universities focus on preparing individuals for productive contribution to mankind by the creation of prepared minds. Universities are earning communities where knowledge is not only disseminated but also advancedAs members of this community, students are not information re cipients who acquire the knowledge in a passive way; instead, they are challenged to achieve their potential and indeed to excel. Therefore, univer sities provide learning conditions that encourage students to remain curi ous, to value diversity in opinions and perspectives, and to think critically and communicate effectively. In this way, students can gain problem-solv ing experience and confidence, which contributes to the development of their abilities and personalities.

更重要的是,大学关注的是通过培养有准备的头脑,为个人对人类做出生产性贡献做好准备。大学是一个获取知识的社区,在这里,知识不仅是传播的,而且是这个社区的成员,学生不是以被动的方式获取知识的信息代表;相反,他们面临的挑战是实现自己的潜力,甚至超越。因此,大学为学生提供了良好的学习环境,鼓励他们保持中庸的态度,重视意见和观点的多样性,批判性地思考和有效地沟通。这样,学生可以获得解决问题的经验和信心,这有助于他们的能力和个性的发展。

Being successful without the experience of going to a university is possible, out to most of us the pursuit of educatión is paramount to our future success in today's world.

在没有上过大学的经历的情况下获得成功是可能的,对我们大多数人来说,追求教育对于我们未来在当今世界的成功是至关重要的。

2018年11月17日雅思写作真题回忆及参考答案:社会生活类

2018年11月17日场的雅思写作话题为高频的社会生活类话题,题目是:The qualities a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at a university or similar academic what extent do you agree or disagree? 一个人想要真正成功所需要的品质是无法在大学或类似的学术机构学到的。对于这个观点,你同意多少?

雅思大作文范文解析:

需要先考虑此处“qualities” 具体涉及到哪些内容,然后结合大学教育的目的展开论述。

雅思大作文范文:

A successful person is equipped with diverse qualities such as friendly personality and problem-solving capacity. Some people contend that students fail to learn those qualities in a university or academic institutions. From my perspective, some of qualities can be acquired in higher education.

一个成功的人具有各种各样的品质,比如友好的个性和解决问题的能力。一些人认为学生在大学或学术机构中没有学习到这些品质。在我看来,一些素质可以在高等教育中获得。

On one hand, two outstanding qualities could be learned in universities. The first one is to specialize in a certain field. One of aims of university education is to impart professional knowledge and principles to students. In other words, through learning systematic courses of their majors, students are expected to be proficient in understanding and applying theoretical knowledge, forming the basis of a promising career path in the future. Critical thinking ability is another significant quality. Universities are learning communities where knowledge is not disseminated but also advanced. As member of this community, college students are not information recipients; instead, they are encouraged to challenge and think critically to achieve their potential and skills. A case in the point is that, in a language teaching class, the professor may require those potential teachers to discuss the topic that whether situational teaching methodology (which is commonly deemed as a more effective method of language teaching) is better than rote memorization. It is the critical thinking that assists students in having comprehensive coverage of issues and overcoming obstacles efficiently.

一方面,大学可以学到两种优秀的品质。第一个是专攻某一领域。大学教育的目标之一是向学生传授专业知识和原则。换句话说,通过对本专业系统的课程学习,使学生能够熟练地理解和应用理论知识,为未来有前途的职业道路打下基础。批判性思维能力是另一个重要的品质。大学正在学习社区,在那里,知识不是传播的,而是先进的。作为这个群体的一员,大学生并不是信息的接受者;相反,他们被鼓励挑战和批判性地思考,以实现他们的潜力和技能。其中一个例子是,在语言教学课上,教授可能会要求这些潜在的老师讨论情境教学法(通常被认为是一种更有效的语言教学方法)是否比死记硬背更好。批判性思维有助于学生全面地了解问题,有效地克服困难。

On the flip side, other qualities successful persons have can not be gained in academic institutions, among which the essential one is the higher level of social skill. Generally, there is no relevant curricula set up by universities; in consequence, it is less likely for students to enhance such skill via knowledge learning. What’s more, self-study and independent learning, which serve as the backbone in university campus life, diminish the opportunities for learners to interact with peers and mentors. In addition, kindness, mercy, modesty, integrity and other noble characters are mostly formed by parents’ guidance and role models rather than university education.

另一方面,成功人士所具备的其他品质在学术机构是无法获得的,其中最重要的是较高的社会技能水平。一般来说,大学没有设置相关的课程;因此,学生不太可能通过知识学习来提高这种技能。此外,自学和自主学习作为大学校园生活的支柱,减少了学习者与同伴和导师互动的机会。此外,善良、仁慈、谦虚、正直等高尚品格大多是由父母的引导和榜样而非大学教育所形成的。

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, higher education cultivates students into specialized talents and develops their critical thinking, enabling them to obtain several but not all qualities that a person needs to become truly successful.

总之,在我看来,高等教育培养学生成为专业人才,培养他们的批判性思维,使他们能够获得几个但不是所有的品质,一个人需要成为真正的成功。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第27篇

大作文:

in some countries, students pay their college or university fees,while in some others, government pays for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh thedisadvantages? Give reasons and examples.

相关题目:

Some people believe everyone has the right to get university education,to what extent do you agree government should make it free to all people no matter of their financial background? .

Higher education has several ways to be funded:

all costs paid by government

all costs paid by students

students could get government loan and after finishing the education students should repaid the cost to the government.

discuss the benefits of these three theories above and decide which is the best way ..

提纲:

1.公平,贫穷的孩子也可以上大学

2.为国家培养人才

1.国家负担重

2.个人的选择,对于不上大学的人不公平

3.鼓励所有人上大学,但是并非所有人都适合

Education is universallydeemed as the dutyof the government, butwhen it comes to higher level,opinions diverge. Some taxpayers take for grantedthat governments should pay for tertiary , I doubt the feasibility of such practice inmany economies. (被动句,并列句,时间状语从句,宾语从句)

Of course calling for public funding foruniversity or college is reasonable from some first beneficiary should be those in poverty or indisadvantageous situation academically and hold the ambition to further theireducation to higher level. They are treated equallyto the access to higher education andit is thisequality that gives them an opportunity to break theirvicious cycle of poverty or crime and to make contribution tobetter life in their hometown when they graduate. In this scenario the nation is able to foster a larger numberof professionals and gain economic and social benefit frombetter human capital. (动名词,定语从句,被动句,并列句,强调句,状语从句)

However, such practice is rarely implemented in the worldincluding some wealthy countries and the direct reason liesin financial issue. Compulsory primary and secondaryeducation usually does not leave the government sufficientbudget for further support in many countries. In addition,going to university is personal choice, which means thatit would be unfair for those who chooseto work after secondary school. An obvious downside of freeuniversity would encourage every school leaver to attenduniversity, butit is also clear that not everyone isable to or is willing to do so. (并列句,动名词,定语从句,宾语从句,形式主语)

In my opinion, to harmonize the above conflictcaused by free higher education, a practical suggestion canbe that the government fund university education by offering interest-free loan or grantingscholarship tothose poor but outstanding students. (非谓语,宾语从句)

词汇拓展:

1. universally 普遍地

2. deem 认为

3. diverge 有分歧

4. take it for granted 认为理所当然

5. feasibility 可行性

6. practice 做法

7. tertiary / higher education 高等教育

8. call for 呼吁

9. fund 资助

10. perspective 角度

11. outstanding 优秀的

12. nonetheless 然而

13. perform well academically 学习好

14. ambition 抱负

15. treat 对待

16. empower/ enable 使有能力

17. break their vicious cycle of poverty 打破贫穷的.恶性循环

18. scenario 情形

19. foster / nurture 培养

20. professional 专业人士

21. human capital 人力资本

22. implement 执行

23. financial 财政的

24. Compulsory 强制的

25. budget 预算

26. sufficient 充足的

27. school leaver 高中毕业生

28. harmonize 协调

29. conflict 冲突

30. interest-free loan 无息贷款

31. grant 批准

32. scholarship 奖学金

33. beneficiary 受益人

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第28篇

1、It is a cliché that happiness is not always proportional to wealth. However, does it mean that any materialistic achievement in a developed country can no longer make its people happier? The answer is apparently “No”.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第29篇

We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trust the journalist, what do u think? And what do you think are the important qualities that a journalist should have?

我们能从新闻中学到知识,但有人认为我们不能相信记者,你的看法呢?你认为记者应该有哪些重要的品格?

思路解析:

问题1: 过于依赖网络,不出去挖掘和发现新闻,总是拷贝和转发别人的文章,缺乏原创性。

问题2: 不客观。举例,很多记者草率的使用那些来源不可靠的信息,这会造成谣言四起。

问题3: 缺乏职业道德。举例,很多记者受贿了。他们隐瞒真相,误导大众,这严重破坏了社会媒体的民主和公平。

素质1: 要有热情。记者应该到事件现场去深入了解情况,掌握第一手的资料。

素质2: 要有责任心。举例,记者应该参与到第一线来收集新闻和线索,这有利于还原真相。

素质3: 要有职业操守。举例,记者应该把社会利益放到自我利益之前,富贵不能淫。

参考范文:

Nowadays, the journalists are losing the prestige in the public because fewer people trust them. In my opinion, this trend is caused by some ill behaviors of them. The reasons and the good qualities of a journalist will be presents as below.

I have to concede that a large proportion of journalists are under the standards of journalism ethics, which leads to the public concerns of the qualities of news in media. Firstly, with the great convenience provided by the Internet, journalists can have an easy access to acquiring all kinds of information. Some of them then begin to repetitively copy or reproduce the news report from certain websites only by clicking the mouse in the office, instead of going outside for practical research. That is to say, these journalists are too lazy to write the original and in-depth news reports.

In addition, the lack of responsibility among journalists also contributes to the news crisis. For example, some of them write and report news by depending on unreliable information sources, so that newspapers and TVs are full of data mistakes and lies. Moreover, influential media are viewed as rumormongers, because they spread false news of natural disasters, social epidemics or terrorist attacks, incurring unnecessary panics in the public. The most worrying aspect is news objectiveness. In many cases of news crimes, bribed news editors cover and twist the truth of social issues, which misleads the public judgment, as well as damages the equity and democracy of social media.

In order to recover the faith and confidence of audience for news media, many good standards of journalist should be built up and tested. Firstly, journalists should have the professional dedication, which means a strong willing to go into the frontline of events, and make efforts of exploring and collecting the firsthand news materials. By this way, the high values of news reports can be ensured. Secondly, high-level work moralities are a must, including honesty, integrity, and law-abiding awareness. These traits can improve the immunity of news practicers from the lure of money. Besides, journalists should learn to give the priority to the social benefits, over the individual media benefits. In other words, what they report on media should be accurate, objective and accountable, rather than publishing untrue news only for attracting more audience.

In conclusion, there are many reasons why massive news media become more untrustful in the public, mainly including the loss of work passion and obligation. For the purpose of curing these ill journalists, some good qualities should be cultivated and encouraged, like the dedication, righteousness and carefulness.

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第30篇

第一个原因,也是很多同学常犯的错误——不重视雅思小作文备考。为什么会出现这样的情况?主要原因有两点:一,自以为雅思小作文很容易,不用备考;二,认为雅思小作文所占分值低,不值得花时间备考。其实雅思小作文难度并不低,尤其是对于一些刚接触雅思考试的同学来说,小作文的写作形式比较新颖,文章虽然短小,但却要会分析图表内容,会正确表达,所以自认为简单不用备考,到了考场上肯定要吃亏。雅思写作分值比重小作文占比三分之一,大作文占比三分之二,总的来看小作文所占比重确实要远低于大作文,但是分值虽然低却也不能忽略小作文备考的重要性。如果我们平时不注重练习,到了考场无法在20分钟内完成小作文,势必会影响大作文的写作时间和质量,另外,小作文虽然分值低却也占据了三分之一,如果忽略了备考拿不到高分,对于雅思写作总成绩影响也很大。

雅思写作低分原因二 错用词汇导致表达不清

雅思写作用一些高端词汇能提升文章的质量,词汇的多样化使用也会为文章增色不少,但是这些都要建立在能够正确使用词汇的前提之下,如果大家对词汇用法还没掌握,就胡乱运用到作文中,不仅会导致文章表达不清,还会直接导致作文低分。建议大家在考试中使用熟练掌握用法的词汇,想要提升文章词汇多样性,建议在平时多积累写作词汇并背记用法。

雅思写作低分原因三 套用万能模板

有的同学因为备考时间不够,急急忙忙地在网上搜万能模板套用,背会以后在考试中直接套用;有的同学是觉得自己写作水平不行,不如直接套用模板写出来的作文质量更高,所以在考试中选择直接套用找来的模板……虽然套用模板写作非常轻松,但想要拿到高分也很困难。一般情况下,在雅思写作考试中直接套用模板的同学很难拿到6分以上的写作成绩,所以小站君建议大家,平时注意提升写作能力,尽量避免在考试中套用模板。

雅思写作低分原因四 写完不检查拼写错误太多

同学们在备考雅思写作的时候有没有养成写完检查的好习惯?其实有很多同学雅思写作低分原因就是因为单词拼写错误太多,而这就是源于没有养成写完检查的好习惯。雅思写作考试一个小时,大家要把写作时间控制在55-57分钟之间,留出3-5分钟检查两篇做作文的拼写错误,这样可以避免因拼写错误太多而扣分。

其实雅思写作低分原因除了上文中列举的四个之外还有很多,比如审题不清,写作太慢等等,上文中四个低分原因是相对来说更需要大家注意的,建议大家在雅思写作备考中养成好习惯,重视小作文备考,掌握词汇正确用法,不要套用万能模板,写完养成及时检查的好习惯。

雅思写作大作文范文解析 第31篇

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.(2016年2月真题)

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travailing to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with thechallenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at the important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall, I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

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