1.年2月13日In some countries, there has been an increase number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
年3月31日Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
3.年5月16日 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
4. 2015年10月8日In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?
结尾段的作用是对图表所要表达的信息做一个概括,
总结图表中的重要feature,并且常常需要将这些feature做一个对比。
我一开始比较困惑,觉得主体段里有很多feature,不知道哪个最重要,要说哪一个,如果逐条列出来就成了重复主体段,不是总结了。
后来渐渐找到了感觉,写结尾段的时候可以回顾一下全篇以及图表,
在脑子里这么想:
还拿刚才那个题举例子。
月12日Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?
月21日The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
3.年9月15日More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?
当然,大家要记住,刷题的目的不是为了大家背诵文章,而是通过常用的真题进行话题词汇的累积和观点方面的头脑风暴。毕竟考试的时候你不能把背诵的内容直接写进去,但是你留在脑海里的话题单词和观点,确实实实在在给你增加分数的砝码,最后希望各位考生多刷题,多思考,勤动笔,少背诵
最好的雅思写作开头段写法 必出自这5类
雅思写作开头段的构成
那我们研究开头段,第一个问题就是开头段是由什么组成的。开头段可以说是对于题目的一个最直接的回应,因此,一个开头段的组成基本是和题目的构成紧密相关的。而雅思大作文的题目构成主要分成两类,一类是和观点有关的题目,比方说“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 这类题目的构成往往为“背景+题目观点+题目问题”。另一类是和事实有关的题目,比方说“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而这一类的题目中就只有“背景事实+题目问题”。
所以, 我们的较为标准的开头段通常便是“背景引入+题目观点复述+己方观点表达”或是,“背景引入+己方问题回应”。
因此我们在本篇先说一说开头段中的背景引入的方式。这个部分我认为应该是整个开头段从语言角度讲最重要的部分,最需要同学们的注意。
一方面因为,学生往往会用较为随便或千篇 一律的描述一笔带过,比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”这样的老套话术,会给考官模板的感觉,也让考官对文章一开始就失去兴趣。另一个需要重视这一部分的重要原因是,这部分灵活度很强,也就是能更好的展现自己的英语实力。
所以,比起简单的同意替换,我们可以把背景引入分为五大类:
雅思写作开头段写法1 摆事实
也就是通过对题目主题的理解,写一句对事实的描述,从而引出题目的话题或是问题。
例:1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)
There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...
2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)
The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...
3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
雅思写作开头段写法2 给原因
也就是根据题目中的观点或是题目中的事实去向前推出一层原因,从而让开头更有逻辑。
例:1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)
As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.
2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.
雅思写作开头段写法3 给结果
通过对于结果的描述,向上推出题目论证的内容。这个方法思路较绕,但是用恰当也算是另辟蹊径。
例:1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.
Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.
2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.
It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……
雅思写作开头段写法4 时间对比
这样的开头做法通常是将古今进行对比,从而引出题目的争论,或是主题。
例:1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)
People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….(现在的人与过去相比预期活得更长,更健康。)
2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)
In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.
3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.
雅思写作开头段写法5 地点对比
例:Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.(有些国家通行同性别教育模式;而有些国家实行同性别教育和混合教育,父母或者孩子自己可以决定哪种模式更适合。)
The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
雅思小作文范文
The pie charts give information about the water used for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in San Diego County, California, and the world as a whole.
It is noticeable that more water is consumed by homes than by industry or agriculture in the two American regions. By contrast, agriculture accounts for the vast majority of water used worldwide.
In San Diego County and California State, residential water consumption accounts for 60% and 39% of total water usage. By contrast, a mere 8% of the water used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at water consumption for agriculture. This accounts for a massive 69% of global water use, but only 17% and 28% of water usage in San Diego and California respectively.
Such dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial water use. The same proportion of water (23%) is used by industry in San Diego and worldwide, while the figure for California is 10% higher, at 33%.
(168 words, band 9)
The picture illustrates the process of producing electricity in a home using solar panels.
It is clear that there are five distinct stages in this process, beginning with the capture of energy from sunlight. The final two steps show how domestic electricity is connected to the external power supply.
At the first stage in the process, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take energy from the sun and convert it into DC current. Next, this current is passed to an inverter, which changes it to AC current and regulates the supply of electricity. At stage three, electricity is supplied to the home from an electrical panel.
At the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for sending any extra electric power outside the house into the grid. Finally, if the solar panels do not provide enough energy for the household, electricity will flow from the utility grid into the home through the meter.(163)
雅思小作文考官范文基本套路
段一:话题重述
段二:概括话题数据的主要特征或规律
段三:详述特征规律一
段四:详述特征规律二
注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,无定论。
第一段:开头段对题目背景进行改写
第二段:具体特征描述1
第三段:具体特征描述2
第二段:全文主要特征总结
开头段就四个字 “改写题目” !虽然改写在大作文的开头段也是同样的要求,但是小作文的开头段改写所需要的技术含量就低了很多个档次了,甚至不需要你们把小作文的题目改写整得太复杂,大家就记住小作文改写三个重点改动词、改时间状语、改地点状语。接下来我们通过几个例题展示给大家看一下:
例题1-原题背景:The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in UK, Sweden,Japan, Turkey and Italy in 2002.
改写的开头段内容:The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.
(主要改动:原题的动词give改成了show, 原题花销spending 改成了expenditure, 原题几个国家的地点精简成了 five different countries)
例题2-原题背景:The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
改写的开头段内容:The graph compares the volumes of goods delivered by four means of transport in the UK during the period from 1974 to 2002.
(主要改动:原题动词show改成了compare, 原题数量单位词quantities 改成了volumes,原题动词transport改成了deliver,原题时间表达between 1974 and 2002 改成了from 1974 to 2002.)
例题3:-原题背景:The graph below gives information from a 2018 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
改写的开头段内容:The line graph shows the amount of energy consumed in the US from 1980 to 2018 together with the projected consumption to 2030.
(主要改动:原题动词give改成了show,原题时间状语since...until的结构改成了 from to的结构,原题的两个名词表达consumption和projection改成了过去分词作定语。)
从上面三个例题我们可以总结出一个套路或者规律,那就是小作文开头段改写追求准确和快速,不求复杂和惊艳, 对象词是核心词,不确定变化是否准确,尽量不换。如果是换动词,时间状语地点状语的话可以尝试以下表格总结的方式来进行:
最后提醒一下小作文开头改写段四个一定要注意的基本问题,但很容易被许多学生忽略掉:
1.不需要改写chart, graph这些词,不用要用picture,image这些词来替换。
要用一般现在时,不用过去时。
3.不要罗列很多年代或者国家(特别是超过4个的时候)。
4.不要照抄题目。
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
雅思小作文范文:
The line graph compares the percentage of people aged 65 or more in three countries over a period of 100 years.
It is clear that the proportion of elderly people increases in each country between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly population.
In 1940, around 9% of Americans were aged 65 or over, compared to about 7% of Swedish people and 5% of Japanese people. The proportions of elderly people in the USA and Sweden rose gradually over the next 50 years, reaching just under 15% in 1990. By contrast, the figures for Japan remained below 5% until the early 2000s.
Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of elderly people is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10 years from 2030 to 2040. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the Japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and the USA will be slightly lower, at about 25% and 23% respectively.(178 words, band 9)
关于雅思图表作文写作的注意事项
Hints for Academic Writing Task 1
DONT copy any part of the question in your answer. This is not your own work and therefore will be disregarded by the examiner and deducted from the word count. You can use individual words but be careful of using long chunks of the question text.
Dont repeat yourself or the same ideas. This gives a bad impression and the examiner realises that it isnt adding to the content of your report.
If you are weak at English grammar, try to use short sentences. This allows you to control the grammar and the meaning of your writing much more easily and contributes to a better cohesion and coherence mark. Its much easier to make things clear in a foreign language if you keep your sentences short!
Think about the tenses of your verbs. If youre writing about something that happened in the past, your verbs will need to be in the past tenses. If youre describing the future, you will need to use the future tenses. If its a habitual action, youll need the present simple tense and so on. If you have time, a quick check of your verbs at the end of the exam can help you find errors. For describing graphs you will probably need past tenses whereas, for describing a process, you will probably need the present simple. Think about the verbs while practising and then it will become easier when you do the exam.
As I just said, if you have finished the exam with time to spare, DONT just sit there!! Check what you have done. If you have time after the check, check again. And so on
具体怎么用,我们来看例图:
比如我们现在要来描述上图黄色区域也就是”other workers' salaries 从1981-2001的趋势变化,使用句式一带进去描述就会是:Other workers’ salaries saw a dramatic fall from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001.
(大家可以尝试使用句式一描述一下蓝色区域teachers' salary的趋势变化)
它又分成三种类型,即统计表(Table),原理图(Diagram),流程图(Flow Chart).前几年的阅读考试图表题以Table居多,而近一两年Diagram 和Flow Chart出现次数较多.
图表题虽然不是阅读的主流题型,但也有可能在你参加的考试中“冷不丁”冒出来.如果没有经过对该题型的研究学习和心理准备,则会由于不熟悉或不能正确理解图表的结构而导致失分.相对而言,Diagram题由于不存在对结构理解的问题,所以是属于简单的题型.而Table和Flow Chart则有可能被命题者设计的较为复杂.解题的关键在于对图表结构的理解和定位词的选择.
It is common nowadays for people to move to a new country as immigrants to seek new opportunities for work or to get married. For new immigrants, one of the major issues is to what extent they should accept the local culture as their own. While it is important for the newcomers to follow the local rules and convention in order to adapt to the new environment and start their new lives, I believe that it is beneficial to both the immigrants and their host countries if the new members bring in their own culture and lifestyle for the sake of cultural diversity.
To begin with, new immigrants would make more smooth transition to their new life if they understand how the society of their host countries works and behave accordingly. To consider a simple example, when an American moves to England, she will have to drive on the left side of the road following the English customs. Otherwise, she will immediately find herself either in a severe accident or in jail for breaking the traffic laws. By the same token, a Mexican woman who immigrates to America will have to try to develop her English proficiency in order to better communicate with the local people whose native language is English. Nonetheless, as I will argue later on, following the local convention in one's daily life is one thing, but accepting the local culture as one's own is quite another.
For the American who is now living in England, even though she has to obey all the English laws, she can still choose to retain her American identity and lifestyle. For example, she may cook American food at home and dine with her friends in American-style restaurants. In addition, she can still speak to her children with her American accent and teach her children American values. This is also true for the Mexican woman who moved to America.
In fact, it is now generally acknowledged that cultural diversity should be considered a strength for a nation as people from different backgrounds will have a chance to learn from one another. For example, the American immigrant who cook American food at home might also share with her English neighbors the American recipes and help bring the American cuisine to an English dinner table. The Mexican woman who takes English courses in the local community college may also tutor her American classmates who are learning Spanish or studying Mexican culture.
In conclusion, people who choose to immigrate to a different country may face great challenges and opportunities as they adapt to the new environment. It is true that they need to make the efforts to learn the new rules and culture of the host country. But they should also be encouraged to retain their own cultures and lifestyles as new members of a more diverse society.
Introduction
The bar chart compares the time spent by 10 to 15-year-olds in the UK on two activities, namely chatting online and playing computer games.
该柱状图比较了英国10至15岁青少年的两项活动,即在线聊天和玩电脑游戏。
Overview
By contrast, girls prefer chatting online. Close to 70% of 10 to 15-year-old girls engage in online conversation each day, compared to about 50% of this cohort who play computer games. Of the girls who do play on consoles, most of them play for less than an hour, whereas most girls who chat online do so for more than one hour, and nearly 10% chat for four hours or more.(188)
饼图:游客分析
The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
As a matter of fact, such practice can bring more benefits in various aspects, especially in economic growth. For one thing, as the newly-tapped energy can directly alleviate the energy shortage, which will to some extent guarantee a country’s industrialisation a promising prospect, both economic and technology development will be spurred, offering better prerequisites to resolving environment crisis by exploring new alternatives. In contrast, the lack of feasible approaches to energy scarcity will undoubtedly bring both economic growth and technology advancement to a standstill.// For another, the locals in remote areas can also be benefitted, as such a policy must provide them with more job opportunities, by which their life quality will be bettered.
反驳:(1)开发能源 → 满足能有需求 → 保证经济发展 → 有资金探索新能源替换,长远看,某种程度上弥补之前可能带来的环境破破坏;(2)偏远地区更多工作机会
alleviate vt. 缓解
spur vt. 刺激;促进
prerequisite n. 先决条件
bring sth. to a standstill静止(状态); 停顿,停滞
句式四的结构通常是用来描述趋势变化发生转变时常用的,比如描述对象在时间区域里面呈现先上升后下降或者先下降后上升。
例句:The cost of books had increased to 23% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. 书的成本在1991年先上升到了23%,然后又下降到了9%。
雅思图表作文模板「经典篇」
静态图表可以为所呈现的信息,只有不同数据之间的对比,无时间变化的图表。主要常见的静态图可以分为:柱状图,饼状图,表格以及对比式的地图题。不同于比如折线图的雅思小作文动态图,静态图的写作技巧有所不同。首先分类,其次按比例进行描写。
对于比例的描述中常用的词:
(大比例:Dominate/occupy the majority of/ stand at the largest of proportion of
which is…注意词性的'替换。)
模板句型:
rank/position second followed immediately/closely by C and D.
B is in the second place.
B is the second most/least popular…
2. 占据(占据多少百分比)
Be/consist/compose/take up…/comprise/constitute/make up/account for/occupies a majority of sth.
. Voluntary workers take up nearly half of the work force in house care sector (医护产业).
Hispanics (a speaking person living into the US. Especially one of Latin American)
综合句型:
be 倍数 as many/much as B(利用句型,雅思考试想要达到高分要求的话,要尽量在主语上下功夫,脑袋里首先想到的主语一定是大家都能想到的,再想想看是否可以用别的主语进行造句)
. Women working as/employed as child minder in the under-35 age group in 1995 were twice as many as in 1990.
Television was twice as popular as washing machine in , with close to 10% of household owning one TV set at home.
(sale volume of television销售量;新高/新低 new high/new low)
主体段落开头必备:
clearly, .../ obviously, .../ apparently, .../ evidently, ...
短语:
According to the table/data, .......
In accordance with the table/data, .....
That从句:
It can be seen from the + 图表+that ......
We can see from the + 图表+that ......
It appears from the data that ......
It indicates from the table that.......
As从句:
As we can see from the data/table, ......
As we can see from the data/ table, .......
As is reflected in the table, ......
According to statistical information, the main reason for abroad is holidays, business, and visits to friends and relatives. Indeed, there is a steady increase in the number of holiday makers; while in 1996 there about of the sample in 1998 there were 20,700 of them. Moreover, with the introduction of more countries within the EC market, travelling for business has also increased. Although there is not a big decrement 3,957 traveled abroad for business during 1998 compared with 3,249 in 1996. Finally, traveling abroad for visiting friends and relatives shows a steady increased to 3,181 in 1998. Consequently, there is a steady in three main reasons for travelling abroad; holidays, business, or to visit relatives and friends.
In addition, there is also an increased change in destinations which people tend to prefer for travelling. The area which appear to be more popular among travelers is Western Europe. Indeed, while in 1994 only19,371 of the sample preferred to spend their holiday(or other reasons) in that main region, there was increase to 24519 in 1998. North America and other areas appeared also increased to 1,823 and 2,486 accordingly. Statistical figures prove that Western Europe seems to be the most favorable place for holiday makers while North America and other areas follow behind.
审题的重要性相信不用我说大家都很清楚,俗话说“要想跑得快,全靠车头带”,
如果一开始的方向都搞错了,后面写再多都是白瞎了。雅思小作文的审题虽然比起大作文来说要轻松很多,但还是存在一些一定要注意的地方,尤其一些雅思小白同学很容易犯的一些小作文审题问题,具体需要注意的问题如下:
The first chart shows the reasons why some people in the UK prefer to cycle to work. Conversely, the second chart gives reasons for those who choose to go to work by car.
The highest percentage of those who favour cycling say that this is because riding a bicycle to work is healthier than driving. 30% of them gave this as a reason. The same amount of people, 30% say that they cycle to work because it causes less pollution. 13% of people cycle to work because it is cheaper than driving. Surprisingly, a similar number of people said that they cycled to work because it is faster than travelling by car.
In contrast to this, the percentage of people who prefer to travel by car because it is more comfortable is 40%. The two least important reasons for going to work by car, with 14% and 11% respectively, is that people need to carry things to work and that it is safer than cycling to work. Finally, 16% say they prefer driving because it is faster than cycling. This contrasts with the cyclists who ride to work because it is faster than driving.
In general, it seems that the majority of people who cycle to work do this for health and environmental reasons. By contrast, those who travel by car want to have a more comfortable journey over longer distances.
The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown at least 150 Words.
图表展示的是成人继续接受教育培训的理由,以及它的费用该由谁来承担的调查统计。请为大学讲座写一篇150字以上的报告。
雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文:
The summary of a survey on adult education is presented in the 2 charts. The bar chart summarizes the factors that caused adults to continue their education, while the pie chart shows the public opinion regarding the funding of adult education.(简要概括导入)
According to the bar chart, 40% of the respondents mentioned “interest in the subject” as the reason they decided to go back to school. This factor was followed closely by the aim to gain qualification at 38%. On the other hand, only 9% of the survey participants said that they went to school in order to meet more people. This is the least popular reason among the 7 given.(细节段1,分析图表1)
Among all the people surveyed regarding the funding, 40% of them felt that this adult education should be the responsibility of the individual. Although 35% of them thought that the employers should lend the helping hand, only 25% agreed that the taxpayers should share the burden.(细节段2,分析图表2)
In summary, the survey showed a mixed opinion regarding the reasons and the funding for adults education.(简要总结)
附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:
: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣
(summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。
三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。
当然,Simon同学不忘补充,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要内容表达的需要,8句,10句都是没问题的。
注意:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。
最新9分雅思图表写作范文之混合图 英国移民变化
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK..Write at least 150 Words.
图表展示-的间英国移民数量的变化情况。请写一篇150字以上的报告。
雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+饼图)9分范文:
The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and .(1句做介绍导入)
Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in and .(2句做图表概述)
In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until . From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.(3句的细节段1)
After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(3句的细节段2)(159)
附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:
: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣
(summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。
三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。
当然,Simon同学不忘补充,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要内容表达的需要,8句,10句都是没问题的。
PS:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。
雅思图表小作文混合图范文分享 世界用水
雅思图表小作文混合图(线图+表格)9分范文:
The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.
It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900 and , and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.
In 1900, around 500km? of water was used by the agriculture sector worldwide. The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. By 2000, global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km?, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km?.
In the year 2000, the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176 million and million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil, at 359m?, was much higher than that in the Congo, at only 8m?, and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265 times more irrigated land.(184 words, band 9)
附雅思小作文simon考官推荐套路
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法,具体结构如下:
: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句话介绍图表大意足矣
(summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句话做图表信息的摘要
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。
三、四段为细节段,每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。
当然,Simon同学不忘补充,这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构,好文无定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要内容表达的需要,8句,10句都是没问题的。
PS:simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段,雅思届尚无定论。
必备雅思写作连接词分享 起承转合一气呵成
雅思写作连接词之起:
First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,
First and foremost;For one thing(… for another);On the one hand(…on the other)
雅思写作连接词之承:
Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to…;Furthermore/what is more/moreover;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result
雅思写作连接词之转:
But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike…. ,A…;Different from… , A….;In fact/ as a matter of fact,
雅思写作连接词之合:
Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that…., we can come to the conclusion that…
另附雅思大作文考官范文示例
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
构思过程:
独居,也就是一个人生活,显然有利有弊,如果选择一边倒观点显然都站不住脚,很难论证,需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处,一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向,建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的角度出发,层次分明论证清晰,值得大家学习。
Introduction
1)背景导入,说尤其在发达国家的大城市,最近几年独居变得更为常见。
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.
(句型结构:It adj. for sb. to do sth. 后置状语补充,注意完成时has become;注意particularly的用法,举特例方便直接,类似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修饰normal代入感强)
2)观点句,我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。
In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
(句型结构:简单句 后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分搭配)
Main Paragraphs 1
1)段首概括,一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.
(句型结构:被动 后置状语并列;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone,地道高分搭配准确;seen as语法得分点;personal & broader economic词汇得分点)
2)分论点1:个人层面上,独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人更独立自强(常见观点)
On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.
(句型结构:前置状语 主语who从句 谓语比较级 宾语who从句,高分复合句;self-reliant高分词,展示词汇量)
3)举例论证 线性推理展开:独居年轻人需要学做饭,做家务,付账单,管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展
A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.
(句型结构:主语从句 插入语 不定式并列 宾语all of which从句;简单分句 被动;valuable得分词;an increase语法得分点;such individuals指代准确,语法和词汇得分点)
4)分论点2:经济角度上看,独居的趋势会导致住房需求增加(加分观点)
From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result ingreater demand for housing.
(句型结构:前置状语 后置定语 简单句;trend towards living搭配准确,词汇和语法得分点;result in学术搭配,词汇得分点;demand for housing词汇得分点)
5) 举例说明展开:这样会让建筑公司,房产中介和其它依赖业主购买产品的公司获益。
This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
(句型结构:简单句 宾语并列 宾语that从句;likely to benefit学术搭配,词汇得分点;construction industry & estate agents展示词汇量;rely on homeowners词汇得分点)
Main Paragraph 2
1)段首概括:上述个人和经济的论点可以反向考虑;(简介易懂,挂钩前文暗含对比,CC满分技巧)
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.
(句型结构:转折 简单句被动;given above非谓语修饰,语法得分点;be considered from学术搭配,词汇语法得分点;the opposite angle词汇得分点)
2)分论点1:和独立的好处相比,独居的人会感觉孤独、隔离和不安(常见观点)
Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.
(句型结构:前置状语 主语从句 宾语并列;rather than无痕迹对比,语法和CC得分点;loneliness & isolation高分词)
3)举例对比 论证展开:他们错过了家人或室友提供的对话和支持,还要承担过重的家庭账单和职责;这样来说,这个趋势就是负面的
They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
(句型结构:简单句并列 宾语从句 简单分句;miss out on地道搭配;emotional support, daily conversation & flatmates词汇加分点;bear the weight of高分搭配,词汇得分点;a negative one指代准确避免重复,语法得分点)
4)分论点2:从经济角度来说,住房需求增加会推高房价和租金(加分观点)
Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.
(句式结构:前置状语 简单句;the financial point of view替换an economic perspective;likely to push up学术搭配;property prices & rents词汇得分点)
5)对比论证 说明展开:虽然让企业获益,但大众包括独居的人都要面临更高的居住成本
While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
(句式结构:让步句 插入语补充 被动;be faced with地道搭配;rising living costs词汇得分点)
Conclusion
1)一句话总结:独居增加对个人和经济影响有好有坏
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(句式结构:总结 简单句 宾补;detrimental不利的,高分词,beneficial & detrimental替换positive & negative;两个on介词短语并列,语法得分点)
雅思大作文评分
TR: 两面观点完整回答问题,分论点详实有深度,首尾段观点总结到位,9分
CC: 全篇结构清晰,整齐,行文连接通顺,易于理解,没有明显模板痕迹,9分
LR: 词汇非常多样,同义替换到位,搭配地道准确,9分
GA: 句型多变,复合句实用灵活,没有语法错误,9分
(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)
考官经典的雅思大作文4段13句模板,大家可以模仿哦,注意,这里所谓的模板,是指他所熟悉和擅长的一种行文结构,而并非具体的模板句型。
月29日 Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
2.年8月13日International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds,why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?
月10日Many customs and the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?
Today the way we consider human psychology and mental development is heavily influenced by the genetic sciences. We now understand the importance ofinherited characteristics more than ever before. Yet we are still unable to decide whether an individual's personality and development are more influenced by genetic factors (nature) or by the environment (nurture).
Research, relating to identical twins, has highlighted how significant inherited characteristics can be for an individual's life. But whether these characteristics are able to develop within the personality of an individual surely depends on whether the circumstances allow such a development. it seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or over-ride other influences, and there seems to be plenty of research findings to confirm this.
My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person's life. Instead, the traits, we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences we have in life are constantly interacting. It is the interacting of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born.
In conclusion, I do not think that either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerful effects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.
线形图的基本特征是,随着一段时间的推移,图里的元素发生升高、降低或者不变的趋势。所以,我们需要掌握基本动词的表达。
有些烤鸭们会准备一大张纸,上面抄满了各种表示不同特征的词和句式,到考试前就背呀背,其实这不一定是好的办法。
英语谚语有云Less is more(少即是多),我的经验是:不要太多,不要太多!每一类的表达,掌握三个就足够了。因为各种表达如果太多的话,到了考场真正考试时可能会记不住,就算是记住了,记得越多,使用时混淆或者用错的可能性就越高。
线形图里最基本的特征是升高和降低,可以用“动词 副词”或“形容词 名词”这两种表达,他们可以相互转化:
还有线形图常出现波动、保持平稳、到达最高或最低点,这样的表达每一类能记住两个就可以了。
雅思线性图表作文模板「最新」
雅思小作文模板--线状图
1.先(上升/下降)后(下降/上升),之后便平稳
According to the data , the years from …to…saw/winess a rise/climb/drop in the number/rate/percentage/proportion of 对象 from数据to数据,which was followed by a rapid decrease/reduce/increase over the ** years.
2.对峰值和低谷的.描述
Also it can be noticed that in ** year ,the number/percentage … reached the buttom . However/on the contrary,**year saw the peak during this period.
……时间点 ,when the number/percentage reached(amounted to)to a peak of… / a high point at …
3.趋势相同描述
The proportion/number of 对象 in the xx and xx are similar and follow the same ** the figures were xx% and xx% respectively,rising to xx% and xx% respectively in **,after dipping to xx% and xx% respectively in **.(总体的趋势介绍)Thereafter,分开介绍即可
4.对未来的表述以及转换词
…is projected to…… as to
…is expected to…… as for
…is forcasted to …… …is estimated to…
5. 对波动的描述
as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of…
如图所示,两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。
……fluctuated dramatically between xx% and xx% during …period .
此外,在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences,最常用的固定搭配如下:
并列: as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what’s more, apart from …
举例: for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially
事实: as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as …
雷同/近似:similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally …
转折: however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, instead (of), in spite of, despite of …
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
接下来用30分钟完整时间仔细阅读以下内容,边读边做笔记,你会感觉相见恨晚的,一股股写作思绪的清流在脑海里不断涌动,认真学习后,相信你的感受会是:
Hints for Academic Writing Task 1
DONT copy any part of the question in your answer. This is not your own work and therefore will be disregarded by the examiner and deducted from the word count. You can use individual words but be careful of using long chunks of the question text.
Dont repeat yourself or the same ideas. This gives a bad impression and the examiner realises that it isnt adding to the content of your report.
If you are weak at English grammar, try to use short sentences. This allows you to control the grammar and the meaning of your writing much more easily and contributes to a better cohesion and coherence mark. Its much easier to make things clear in a foreign language if you keep your sentences short!
Think about the tenses of your verbs. If youre writing about something that happened in the past, your verbs will need to be in the past tenses. If youre describing the future, you will need to use the future tenses. If its a habitual action, youll need the present simple tense and so on. If you have time, a quick check of your verbs at the end of the exam can help you find errors. For describing graphs you will probably need past tenses whereas, for describing a process, you will probably need the present simple. Think about the verbs while practising and then it will become easier when you do the exam.
该图表对比的是1930-1980五十年间五个国家囚禁犯人的数据情况。
总的来看,美国、加拿大、新西兰数据最为突出,而50年里,各国在这方面的数据都呈现了很大的波动性。
首先,英国的监禁数据一直处于上升中。从1930年的30,000例逐渐增至1980年的85,000例,其中1940-1970年间增长最快。
第二,澳大利亚和新西兰的状况有点相似,但没有新西兰起落幅度那么大。这里,我们看到1930年时,澳大利亚的数据是70,000例,而新西兰则高达近100,000例。接下来的1940年两国的数据都出现了很大的下降,特别是新西兰下降了接近45,000例。1950年,新西兰数据继续小幅度下降,澳大利亚则小幅上扬。之后的.1960年里两国数据都大幅上扬,分别达到70,000例和78,000例。1970年出现了很有趣的一面:英国、澳大利亚、新西兰三国的数据持平在79,000例,接下来的1980年我们看到的则是澳大利亚的大幅下跌与新西兰的继续增长。
第三,美国和加拿大起点非常高,1930年分别是100,000例和120,000例。1940年,美国大幅攀升至130,000例,而加拿大则出现了约10,000的下降。1950年,情况又发生戏剧性变化,美国降低了约20,000例,而加拿大则上升到大约115,000例。1960年,美国上升,加拿大下降,两国数据分别是118,000例和102,000例。1970年两国同时大幅下降,美国跌至95,000例,加拿大跌至83,000例。1980年美国的增长幅度大得惊人,迅猛攀升至138,000例,加拿大也上升至90,000例。
由此,我们看出,这五个国家的监禁情况在50年间确实发生了很多的变化。
The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.
雅思小作文范文
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.(192 words, band 9)
雅思图表作文真题:混合图:温度与降水
The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.
雅思小作文范文
The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.
It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.
Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.
While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(173 words, band 9)
雅思图表作文的写作技巧
一、雅思表格图图表作文的写作要点
1横向比较。介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势
2不需要将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值
3最对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的
二、雅思曲线图图表作文的写作要点
1极点说明。即,对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明
2趋势说明。即,对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平
3交点说明。即,对图表当中多根曲线的交点进行对比说明
三、雅思饼状图图表雅思作文的写作要点
1介绍各扇面及总体的关系
2各个扇面之间的比较,同类扇面在不同时间,不同地点的比较
3重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的`,最小的,互相成倍的
四、雅思综合图图表作文的写作要点
1不求甚解,不拘泥于细节
2分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表
3不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系
图表雅思作文要如何切入
图表雅思作文要如何切入?以下从几方面分析:
1、好的支持句肯定包含了恰当的衔接手段。衔接手段能够是衔接词,同时还能够是灵活而准确的指代。想要充分发挥支持的功能,支持句一定要紧扣主题句,提供准确的事实和数据,并且在语气上和主题句相匹配。尽管母语的使用过程里衔接手段是自然流露的,如此同样是雅思写作9分有关连贯及衔接的评分标准,但是鉴于6分到8分评分细则里针对衔接手段的强调不但只是在质量上有表现,同时在数量上也是有表现的,因此在训练小作文的过程中,有意地增加衔接手段也不是不好,即使是有时也许会不自然,但这样总比由于因为衔接手段不足而在这一项跌至5分更好。
2、数据直接反映出来的事实算得上是描写的要点,因此是支持句的关键信息。雅思小作文数据类图表写作的误区也只是满足在又或是说专注于对数据本身的描写,而把这一类文章基本的功能忽略了以此帮助读者理解图表。比如在描写某一个体现持续上升的数据时,若只是表达为某某数字从几几年的多少持续上升到了几几年的多少,又或是这条线呈上升的趋势或者这个比例是持续变大的,针对读者来理解图表基本上帮助不大,所以意义不大。
3、不难发现,其中包含了衔接手段、事实陈述与数字证据的支持句不可避免地变成了复杂句或者复合句,而在其中又包含了各种从句、并列句和非谓语动词,和概括句构成语法现象丰富的段落,如此针对评分标准里的任务回应程度
、连贯流畅性和语法的多样性全部属于直接的应对方式,并且还给词汇的变化尽量的创造了机会,或者说留出了空间。
雅思写作范文:生活压力变大的原因
Task:It is said that people’s life now is becoming more and more stressful. What are the causes and how to solve it?
思路解析:
1. 科技更新太快,这意味着人们不得不很努力地不停学习新的知识和技能。此外,激烈的就业竞争也让人们每天都处在紧张状态中。
2. 需要背负很多家庭责任,如照顾父母,照顾小孩。而生活成本却在不断增加,这让人们感受到经济上的压力。
3. 如何释放压力:多运动,运动能让人摆脱抑郁和沮丧,恢复精神上的放松。多跟人交流,这能获得来自他人的安慰,建议,和关爱,让人们看淡困难和焦虑。
参考范文:
The acceleration of industrialization and the prosperity of economy benefit our society a great deal. But with the speeding up of economic development, people are facing more and more pressure from various aspects of their life. This essay will explore the causes for the heavy pressure and put forward some feasible solutions.
One of the major causes is that people’s living rhythm has been promoted immensely with the upgrading of new-knowledge and hi-tech. To keep abreast with the society, people have to work intensively on the one hand and improve their knowledge on the other. The economic globalization strengthened international cooperation and expand people’s scope of activity. The fierce social competition deprives people of their spare time and makes their life more stressful.
Another factor comes from the pressure of people’s family. People in the current society have to shoulder the responsibility of family maintenance. On the one hand, people have to care for their parents, creating for them a happy and comfortable life. On the other hand, they have to give their children good education. To earn more money, people have to work very hard to finance their family.
If people live in heavy pressure, they will have problems both physically and psychologically. To relieve the pressure, I think the following suggestions are feasible and practical. Firstly, people are suggested to go in for some sports games in their spare time or at the weekend. Sports can build up people’s physique and make them vigorous. Secondly, people should communicate with others frequently and confess their trouble and difficulty to others, which is a very magic way to release one’s pressure. Finally, people have to find a balance between money and health. Otherwise, one’s health will be overdrawn and spoiled by money earning.
In brief, good life should not be obtained at the price of the deterioration of one’s health. People should improve their living pattern and lead a life of high quality.
(337 words)
雅思写作范文:长期离家工作的好坏
Task:Today some person have to work away from his family, what are the advantages and disadvantages?
思路解析:
离家工作的好处1:培养了独立性。举例,这些人不得不依赖和挖掘自己的潜力和能力来应付一切生活中的挑战和困难。
离家工作的好处2:培养了社交能力。举例,他们要面临一个完全陌生的社会,和不同肤色,生活习惯和宗教的人群打交道,这培养了跨文化理解力。
离家工作的坏处1:家庭关系会崩塌。这些离开的人无力照顾自己的亲人和孩子,让他们感觉到被抛弃。
离家工作的坏处2:精神压力过大。长时间离家的人总是饱受思乡病,孤独和焦虑的折磨。
参考范文:
Nowadays, working in a new place or a foreign country distant from homes has been a heated trend in debate. In my view, this change simultaneously brings benefits and risks to these people leaving home, and my reasons would be explored as below.
The main relevant benefits are the improvement of independence and interpersonal skills. Firstly, being away from the comfortable and safe zone built up by parents and friends in homeland, people in a strange environment, especially the youngsters, have to take responsibility for daily affairs, tasks, behaviors, health care and schedules. These efforts can improve their self-care skills and decision-making ability. Moreover, living in a different cultural circumstance, frequently inevitable interactions with local peers and residents who have different skin colors, social manners, lifestyles and religions serve as a catalyst for increased maturity. In other words, after encountering with cultural diversity, these outcomers would become more independent, flexible, patient and adaptable, and acquire proficient social skills as well. Lastly, for people who live and work abroad, they can stay a foreign language immersion for a long term, thus helping them to master how to speak a second language natively.
However, the demerits associated with this kind of emigration should never be ignored. For one thing, as many people, especially young adults, leave hometowns for far-away places, they leave family behind. As a result, extended family systems begin to disintegrate. The result is often a lack of childcare and eldercare for family members. When a younger person leaves, marriage prospects for young adults who decide to stay sill decline.
For another, the second demerit is about a challenge on the spiritual level. Being isolated from family and motherland, an immigrator tends to be troubled in the mental stress. Specifically, the homesick, loneliness, frustration caused by cultural conflicts, and fear about the future always surround these helpless people, and give them psychological suffering all the time.
In conclusion, it is very hard to decide that advantages of this issue outweigh the disadvantages, or the reverse is true. Although such experience is beneficial for the form of independent and social abilities, as well as mature mind, the absence from home is detrimental to the people and their families.
(367 words)
雅思写作范文:人们是否变的更独立
Task:Some people think that in the modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other,while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
思路解析:
更独立的原因1:互联网降低了人们交流的频率。举例,人们习惯于依赖网络来获取新闻,知识,经验和答案,而不是面对面的和其他人的询问,讨论和谈话。
更独立的原因2:机器自动化让人们不再依赖彼此。举例,ATM可以让人们自己取钱,而不是去银行柜台对柜员提出要求。
更依赖的原因1 : 在一个后工业时代,每一个社会个体都被教育和训练在某一个领域精通,这意味着他们的工作必须依赖其他同事和行业的合作; 他们的生活必须依赖来自他人提供的产品和服务。
参考范文:
Should the level of interdependence between people of today be up or down? This question has been a heated social issue in debate, and resulted in opposite views among the public. Personally, I believe current human is more independent than before, and my reasons will be explored as below.
In terms of information communication, the thriving Internet today has reduced the level of people’s connection with others, because this technology can provide more abundant, timely and objective information to every social individual. In other words, modern people are used to relying on the Internet for the acquirement of news, knowledge, social experience and even answers of school tasks, rather than face-to-face questioning, talking or discussing with others. Therefore, the common interdependent human relationships, such as the ones between students and teachers, between children and parents, between the youth and elders, are fading.
Machinery automation has also contributed much to the independence of people, because this technology makes people self-sufficient. For example, by using artificial intelligent devices like Auto Teller Machine, Vending Machine, microwave ovens, sweeping robots and face recognition access control system, people can deal with day-to-day transactions and household chores, or obtain common goods and services by themselves, with no more reliance on service personals, such as clerks in shops, tellers in bank counters, chefs in restaurants, or doormen in the gateway.
However, the main reason why people become more dependent is about the specialization in the post-industry age. Today, every social individual has been educated and trained to be expert at only one certain field. That is to way, a contemporary employee needs the technological communication and cooperation with co-workers in other departments or with another companies in different subjects, for the purpose of accomplishing the whole working project. Similarly, daily-life running and management are far beyond the limitation of any individual’s abilities. In other words, all people have to seriously depend on others who provide food, news, transportation, entertainment and maintenance of facilities.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the increasing independence of people is dramatic and should not be ignored. Although we are becoming specialized in narrow directions of careers, we have more independence and self-sufficiency, by the support of the Internet and automatic technologies.
(372 words)
小轩在课上时常听到烤鸭们争吵柱状图究竟应该按照什么标准来分类,有的老师说应该按照国家分,有的范文又说应该按照行业来分。
其实,因为分类标准不一样,所以写出来的文章结构会不一样,但都是正确的写法!
如果细心观察这图,会发现存在一些倍数和相等的数据,比如,在日本从事服务业的人数是工业的两倍,在巴西从事农业和工业的人数相等,在印度从事农业的远比工业和农业的多,这些都是特征数据,应该在写作时有意突出。
根据这些特征,以三个国家为线索先写一个中文的提纲:
根据这个中文提纲,就可以很简单地写出全部主体段了:
题目:Some people believe that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and that a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that seeking for a decent job is not as easy as decades ago due to the economic recession and competitive job market. Although some may argue that a sense of satisfaction towards their jobs is crucial, personally, I believe that a permanent job is more meaningful.
On the one hand, a permanent job can guarantee to meet employee’s basic needs. This is because almost no one can escape from the reality. Everyday, we are facing with a variety of expenses, such as food, shelter, transport, bill and even education tuition for children. With a relatively stable job, people, especially those in middle aged can cover most expenses. In addition, those who stay in the same company or institute are more likely to get a promotion as they show the loyalty towards their company. However, those who change their jobs frequently may meet unintended outcomes. For example, they may find difficult to support themselves and raise their family members.
On the other hand, those advocates for pursuing a job they love might regard job satisfaction as the priority when finding an employment. They believe only working with friendly colleagues and employers and under a flexible working time schedule, can they fulfill their potential and accomplish all tasks well. However, this idea is unrealistic. For example, dozens of young graduateshave the bitter result because of their immature thought, that is unemployment.
In my opinion, there is no perfect job in the world. The only thing we can do is to find a suitable job rather than a perfect one. There is a 10,000 hours theory in psychology thatpeople who devotethemselves to jobs and spend more than 10,000 hours constantly can become experts in that field. This theory tells us a plain fact that no one can achieve a sense of job satisfaction without years of efforts and persistence.
In conclusion, people having a constant job are more likely to have a promising job career and wellbeing.
The chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008. 这张图表提供了1999年至2008年间英国移民、移民和净移民的信息。
Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007. 移民和移民率在这段时间内都有所上升,但移民人数明显更高。净移民在2004年和2007年达到顶峰。
In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood at just under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and it remained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004. 1999年,超过45万人在英国生活,而移民的人数不到30万人。净移民人数约为16万人,直到2003年才达到类似水平。从1999年到2004年,移民率上升了近15万人,但移民人数却少了很多。2004年,净移民人数达到近25万人的峰值。
After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.(159)
2004年之后,移民率仍然很高,但移民的人数却在波动。2007年移民突然减少,2008年达到了大约420,000人的峰值。结果,2007年净移民人数上升到24万,但在2008年又回落到16万左右。(159)
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The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015. 从2000年到2015年,这条线图将三家公司的废物产出进行了比较。
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
很明显,图表上显示的这三家公司生产的垃圾量发生了重大变化。虽然A公司和B公司在15年的时间里看到了废物的产量下降,但C公司生产的废物量却大幅增加。
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne. 2000年,A公司生产了12吨废物,而B公司和C公司分别生产了大约8吨和4吨废料。在接下来的5年里,公司B和C的废料产量增加了大约2吨,但是公司A的产量下降了大约1吨。
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.(192 words, band 9)
从2005年到2015年,公司将废物产量减少了大约3吨,公司B减少了大约7吨的垃圾。相比之下,C公司在同样的10年时间里,废物产量增加了大约4吨。到2015年,C公司的废物产量已升至10吨,而A和B公司的垃圾量已降至8吨,仅为3吨。
混合图:英国移民
The chart below shows long-term international migration in UK.
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